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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State 
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Spun within my soul Loves web, attaching our hearts Woven, you and I ~Sheri |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Irie~ This is just the loveliest Senryu. So little ... so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
silken threads of love patterened in heart as in soul as two become one lovely senyru from you. Love these little gems |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
 Marge & Mark....Many thanks to both of you for your replies! This was my first attempt at one and I'm not even sure if I've done it right. It was fun to try!  Love your response Mark...Thanks< !signature--> ~Sheri [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 09-20-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful Irie!! You are really trying out new things. . . and doing well. . . Excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
First one?? It's perfect Irie ... a lovely Senyru! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful Irie!! Very nice writing!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sven...Yes, I'm stepping out a bit! I'm enjoying trying the new things. Thank you so much for your reply...glad you liked it. Kit...Yep, my first one.  I'm glad you think so. I think I will be trying some more.Thanks for taking the time to reply. LW...I'm glad you like it....and thank you for reading and replying to my post. Many thanks to all of you! ~Sheri |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
I think this is an absolute beauty, so little but says so much. Perfect  |
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Tepok Bopar Junior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 27 |
Caught in the web of life. I can relate. Excellent Senryu Sheri. Cheers, Tepok |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Marsha...I'm so glad you think so. Thank you Tepok...Maybe I've misunderstood...but what do you mean "caught" in the web of life? Is this a good or bad thing? At any rate, I'm glad you've enjoyed...Thank you. And cheers to you too! ~Sheri |
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