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Cinderella For Sarah

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Marge Tindal
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~*~
She came
entrancing
everglancing
*where she*
had
been

~*~*~*~
~*~A lady regally~*~
*~*   attired in just  *~*
~~     the loveliest     ~~
~~        of dress        ~~
** ~ ~ ~ ~          never          ~ ~ ~ ~ **
more lovely
   as she waltz    
danced round room
would be partners sign
her dance card anticipating
her charms and sighing when
their names graduated to the top
of her list what a night it was a night
of beauty and of charming chance so easily
taken until one in particular was taken with her
easy charm and was captured by the delight of holding
a princess forevermore in his life the world stood still

for him     for her
forever        and ever


*Sarah is my mentor student
who cannot speak with words,
but is very animated in her
belief in fairy tales coming true.
Sarah, love ... this is your lady.



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 09-19-2000 10:40 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~My goodness Marge,....you are incredible!!! This is stunning. Absolutely. How sweet. How very artistic. Take care you. *Peace.
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2 posted 09-19-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Marge, YOU are Sarah's lady....an my fairy tale.This is wonderful!!!
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3 posted 09-19-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

WoW, Marge!  This is beautiful!  Your talent leaves me speechless.  
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4 posted 09-19-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Marge, this is so touching, beautifully penned, dear lady!

Corinne
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SpitFire~
Thank you !
I'll be the first to admit that the words came easy ...
the formatting was a WENCH !
Wheeeeeeeew !  She's worth it !

Balladeer~
Ever hear of fairytales coming true ?
Love ya'

TennesseeAngel~
Thank you.
I don't know about speechless,
but this one left me breathless !
Now where is Serenity with that Tylenol ?

Corinne~
Thank you, hon.
I'm floating right now at getting it done.
Sarah will be sooooooo tickled.
Sarah is the beauty - this one was the
BEAST !

Thanks everyone !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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marge-
  wow!  you've done it again.  this is
  amazing.    sarah is very fortunate
  to have someone as special as you care
  so much about her.    thanks for
  sharing this.  

  love ya,
      -vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Mark Bohannan
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okay you....you know that I have been trying for hours now trying to accept this challenge in silence but you know what.....I just dont feel right about dressing up a cyber doll with my words....lol..yeah that's it...see just being a gentleman.    Marge my friend....I now KNOW the pain you went through to create this one and I commend you on the creativity and style but the words say so much much more and that is what counts...so congrats to you for sitting me down....(not down for the count though).lol....Beautiful my friend just as beautiful as you and Sarah.
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Lovely Marge...beautiful to wake up to...
~~soft smiles
Maureen
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Marge* You are every childs dream come
true...weaving a fairy tale for such a sweet
hearted little girl...**tears in my eyes** We need not hear to know the beauty of the
music...big ((hugs)) to you...and to Miss
Sarah~
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Vicky~
Thank you.
Children have only to ask and I'm putty on the page !
Their smiles are worth it all.

MarkB~
And you ARE a gentleman !
So are ya' trying to tell me that you're
cyber-doll challenged !  LOL !
Sarah will like knowing you like it.

Maureen~
Thanks, Hon.
Glad you found the smile.

ButterfliesDC~
*Hugs* sent your way just for who you are.
Love ya'
Thanks to all of you.
~*Marge*~ and Sarah


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 09-20-2000 03:56 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

And YOU my dear, are such a wonderful fairy Godmother!!!!!  What a beautiful poem for Sarah, I just don't know how you do it all Marge!  Bonnie
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Marge~

Love the formatting!!  It is wonderful!!  Sarah is a lucky lady to have such a talented and caring mentor.  Wonderful writing my friend!!  

Hi to Sarah too!!  Hope all her dreams come true.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
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Marge--you may write a tale or two, but your heart is true blue...wonderful!!!
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This is so sweet, Marge, and soooooo creative!! I love it!!

Denise
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Bonnie~
What a sweet thought.
Bippity-Boppity-Boo !

LoneWolf~
I'm the lucky one and Sarah is a dream !

Martie~
Thanks, doll.

Denise~
I sure appreciate knowing you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~



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Poems in rainbows - Poems in ball gowns
Poems in overflowing wine glasses
this may be the most loving - and I am in awe
I agree with Mark - I won't be attempting any such page dressing - but my admiration for and appreciation of you and your lovely words is unending
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Marge,
You are an artist with a most unusual gift for words. Your work is awesome.

Deb


[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 09-21-2000).]
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marge!  wow!  this is amazing    and how lucky sarah is to have you as her friend!  

hugs, dg

i'm growin'
i dont like it
i'm growin' and it hurts
i love you
but i'm tired
i guess i've got a lot to learn
-w. watson
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Wilfred~
Thank you soooooo much. I appreciate you.
I apologize for not getting back to these
responses sooner.

BloomingRose~
Thank you very much for your sweet comments.

DG~
I thank you, my friend.
And I must repeat -
I am the lucky one to have this Sarah-ella in my life !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Yeowzah! This is beautiful!

You have a touch, dear lady....a touch.

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Marge Tindal
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THANK YOU, sweet Ed~

Just this night ... sitting with my little Delaney as we unfolded the story of Cinderella ... I remembered my little Sarah and all she'd been through in the short of her lifetime ... Sarah ... you were and are, love to fill my heart~
How blessed I feel to be able to read the story of Cinderella with Delaney and have her fully enjoy each moment of it~
This ~Poet~ is sooooo fortunate~
~*Me*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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