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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-09-19 10:12 AM

Memories Of...

My ~velvet eyes~
enticed by you
once upon a time
when blue
remember how
your words caress
and left me often
without breaths

Those places
where your eyes can't rest
inside and feeling
yours, that pressed
words of charm
and sinful deeds
entwine and fill
suffice to feed

Leaving kissed
and sighing, where
your eyes can't see
your prints left there...
at times, on days
when like this, reign
the myst that covers
eyes again

With happy tears
some sad, that flow
awaiting words
of yours to show...
and rise me then
to heights of bliss
just wanting more,
a lasting kiss...

Memories of
the lips, I miss

Maureen
9*2k

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-19-2000).]

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

1 posted 2000-09-19 10:18 AM

Maureen - a beautiful poem of love and loss. You write so well, and you get even better with each poem.

MMoonchild
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2 posted 2000-09-19 10:32 AM

thank you Long John...

I bounce around in style and flow
but have written about a thousand or so
many much better than those on here
but when inspiration is lost, I fear
the best of me, just doesn't show....

~~soft smiles
Maureen
someday, I will write
with more depth again...

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
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3 posted 2000-09-20 09:43 PM

Maureen that was so wistful. I loved every word.

Elizabeth

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2000-09-20 10:04 PM

What does show is beautiful, Maureen...

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2000-09-20 10:07 PM

Me too, maureen...all the above and more.

jwesley

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-09-20 10:22 PM

Elizabeth

thank you..I was inspired by another poets words I read elsewhere...

bringing back memories...of
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-09-20 10:23 PM

Balladeer
so kind of you to say so..thank you

Maureen

MMoonchild
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8 posted 2000-09-21 06:44 AM

jwesley

and I thank you also for the nice thoughts

~~soft smiles
Maureen

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2000-09-21 07:04 AM

Maureen, you always write so beautifully, because you write with your soul. You may be a bit battered and bruised just now, but that seems to make your words even better. Anyway take care of yourself, soft smiles and warm hugs, Marsha.

MMoonchild
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10 posted 2000-09-21 09:29 PM

Marsha, you don't know how much I appreciate your supportive words...each one is treasured
~~soft thanks and hugs
Maureen

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