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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-09-18 05:53 PM


Moonlit Walks

under silvered plate
moon glows on secret belief
there, in love’s release



© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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1 posted 2000-09-18 05:55 PM



Wow - simply beautiful!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2000-09-18 06:27 PM


Sunshine,
Something new for you. Very good.

Sven
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3 posted 2000-09-18 06:41 PM


Wonderful my friend. . . simply wonderful. . .

I like these. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2000-09-18 06:56 PM




luna's glow brings forth
passions untold til this night
secrets now unfold

belief now confirmed
as two lovers meet tonight
in midst of love's trust




[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-18-2000).]
ggrn3
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5 posted 2000-09-18 07:43 PM


Sunshine
  You really know how to brighten a day even on a moonlit night.
Simply beautiful.

Garfield

Gemini
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6 posted 2000-09-18 07:54 PM


Sunshine-This one glowed, very nicely written.
LngJhnAg
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7 posted 2000-09-18 09:00 PM


Sunshine - this is really pretty.  May I repost a "moonlight" haiku I wrote earlier today?  Thank you

Cats in the moonlight,
Carousing and yowling loud.
Well-thrown shoe ends it.


Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2000-09-18 09:13 PM


Sunshine,

Great writing!  This is awesome.  I love the moon!!  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

BSC
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9 posted 2000-09-18 09:14 PM


Simplicity at its finest Karilea....Just beautiful.  HaHaHaHa @ LngJhn..... Bonnie
Sunshine
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10 posted 2000-09-18 09:54 PM


Thank you Melissa...

Sy, I've got more out there...

Sven, more coming...

Mark, so glad you've added to this...

Garfield, the moon's been lovely of late...

Thank you Gemini...

LJA...why am I not surprised and sitting here with a Cheshire grin on my face...

LoneWolf...so glad to know we share favorite things...

Bonnie, I'm still LOL at LJA too!

Thank you everyone...


tracie66
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11 posted 2000-09-19 05:48 AM


what a beautiful haiku
Lovely sunshine  
Tracie


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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