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jlocke
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since 2000-09-10
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0 posted 2000-09-18 12:42 PM



Passions in Poetry
What a beautiful beast
We post up our words
So the whole world can feast

We give up our deepest thoughts
Whatever they may be
We pour out our hearts
So the world may see

We tell of loves found
And of loves lost
We tell of our pursuit for love
No matter the cost

We write of our tragedies
Our lies and our comedy as well
And if you are a publisher
Our poems we will sell

It gives to us poets
A limit with no ends
Such a wonderful community
A Family of Friends




Love is the law, love under will.



© Copyright 2000 Jeremy Locke Culberth - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-09-18 02:46 PM


Hi jlocke...
           You described this family to a T!!
You can find any kind of human drama here that you need..........and it's great, because of people like you. It's good to have you here, and good to read you here, too!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-09-18 09:59 PM


jlocke,

Wonderful poem about Passions!!  I am very happy to see you have been inspired here.  I knew you would be.     Keep up the great work!!

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2000-09-18 10:03 PM



A perfect tribute to all of us at passions.  I love this! Thank you for sharing it with us and I hope that Ron sees it  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
4 posted 2000-09-18 10:08 PM


That's nice. I'm glad to know I have a net friend.

Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
5 posted 2000-09-19 06:44 AM


This is a very wonderful tribute, jlocke.. I like it a lot - and it does sum us up nicely... and guess what... Ron sees everything!!
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
6 posted 2000-09-19 06:55 AM


Exactly!!!   Tis why it's Home... truly
enjoyed~

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
7 posted 2000-09-19 07:59 AM


jlocke,
you put it so well.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
8 posted 2000-09-19 08:04 AM


jlocke, you have summed up this place so well. Great poem.
Dee

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
9 posted 2000-09-19 09:25 AM


jlocke - you have inspired me!  Thank you thank you thank you.  Incidently, terrific sentiments.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
10 posted 2000-09-19 10:59 AM


Smiling here...what a description  
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
11 posted 2000-09-19 11:07 AM


BINGO!
Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
12 posted 2000-09-19 12:25 PM


jlocke you have surely got this right, we all love it here, enjoyed this poem!
Gemini
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
13 posted 2000-09-19 01:23 PM


jlocke-Lovely description, wonderfully written.
2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
14 posted 2000-09-19 02:24 PM




[This message has been edited by Melton L. Culberth (edited 09-19-2000).]

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
15 posted 2000-09-19 02:28 PM


What a lovely tribute to Passions and the inspirations we find daily in this home away from home. Wonderful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

jlocke
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since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
16 posted 2000-09-19 02:29 PM


Sunny1, Lone Wolf, Melissa Honeybee, Melton L. Culberth, Nan, Butterflies_dont_cry,  Kethry, Dee, LngJhnAg, hoot_owl_rn, Sunshine, Rosebud1229, Gemini,Kit McCallum:

Thank you friends.
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Love is the law, love under will.




[This message has been edited by jlocke (edited 09-19-2000).]

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