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Do You Remember..........by Bill and Sunny
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Do You Remember..........by Bill and Sunny |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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For your pleasure......a duet of Bill Charles' "Do You Remember", and Sunny1's "I Remember Well". We hope you enjoy! < !signature-->~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~  My Lady, will you meet me tomorrow at dawn, in "Glockamora", the most romantic place we both know? We met there for the very first time, remember, though it seems like ages ago? My Lord, I'll be there at dawn, tomorrow, in "Glockamora", It is the most romantic place we know... I do remember when we first met there... Why does it seem like a lifetime ago? I will be waiting in the early morning of the day, before the mist starts lifting from the pond... The green forest will be so quiet, and I'll be listening for you, Just as the fairy waves her wand... As the mist slowly swirls around you... I see you waiting for me by the pond... No sound can be heard in the forest... Except that of a fairy, waving her wand... The enchanted bridge that we knew once before, You know - the one that crosses the stream? The stream that flows through the valley, which brought us closer to our dreams... I will cross the enchanted bridge... That rises over the silver stream... We have followed the stream to the valley before, And almost met up with our dreams... When I see you standing there in the morning light, wearing a lily-white dress, just for me... I would gently and firmly take your hand in mine, and walk with you, by the pond so serene... When you see me in my dress made of light... You will know it was worn just for you... I will give you my hand, by the pond we will walk, And we'll drink, of the sweet morning dew... I would gaze at you with my gentle blue eyes, and cherish you, as you smiled... Watching the gentleness of your face, looking like, a mother's child... Into your gentle blue eyes I will gaze with my heart... As your love brings a smile to my face... I am young, once again, Like a sweet mother's child... Full of wonder, excitement, and grace... While you stood there in the misty dawn, with the breeze blowing through your hair... I would slowly turn and face you, and kiss your soft ruby red lips, if I dare... Here I stand, in the misty dawn... A gentle breeze blowing my hair... As you turn to face me, I feel you so close... Please kiss me...Oh, kiss me...and we dared... And again I would whisper about the first time we met, On the enchanted bridge, that crosses the stream... You know - the one that flows through the valley, filling us full with our dreams? You held me, and kissed me, and whispered about... the bridge that lies over the stream... Of bridge and of stream and of valley, you talked... Where we could fulfill all our dreams... And then I ask My Lady, will you meet me tomorrow, at dawn, in "Glockamora", the most romantic place we both know? We met there for the very first time, remember, though it seems like ages ago? My Lord, I will meet you tomorrow, in "Glockamora", In that romantic place we both know... I remember well when we met the first time, Although now... It doesn't seem so long ago... Thank you for joining us!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-20-2000).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
What an astounding pair you make! Finding a common place...together...and sharing it! Thoroughly enjoyed this. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Such wonderful duets you two share with us. I dont know how this one made it past me but I am glad I finally caught up with it. Nice to see our resident duet still pumping them out.  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello passing shadows... Thank you so much for your reply, and yes, we do have such fun sharing. I'm glad you enjoyed this one!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Mark... Yes, I'm glad to see you here, too!! It's always good to get your input. I think there are quite a few more duets to come....Thank you, my friend...... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, I just had to reply to this duet of ours. To me it is just absolutely beautiful, tender, and so very loving. And your magic touch that you given, to complete it made it so. Thanks Sunny, always will I be grateful, as this is one of my most favortite poems. Bill |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
When romance is in town the birds sing and the sun shines and as two lovers embrace the world becomes a lovely incredible place. James |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill This was beautiful when you posted it as a single, but even more beautiful with the two of you. It has a totally different meaning with the duet. didi |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Bill... This really is a special poem, very special....but only because of your wonderful talent in the first place. It is an honor to work with you, and to share the joy of writing. Thank you so much for the chance! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi James... Yes, romance can always bring out the best in 2 people, and it does make the world seem like a lovelier place.......thank you for stopping by to read our duet!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bill and Sunny A most delightful and enchanting piece...I love it...well done to both of you Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Tracie.... Bill and I thank you so much, and we are glad you came by for a read!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Bill and Sunny1 - a wonderful duet - filled with longing and romance. I really like the collaboration you two shared. Hey! Perhaps we could do a threesome..err... trio? You know, something like, Sunny1 has this furry little kitten, and then Bill comes by to see Sunny1 and the kitten scratches him, and then they call me, Long John Kitty Kicker, to enable them to have some moments in peaceful bliss. So then, being careful Pandora doesn't espy me, I grab the little kitty and... well, you get the idea. Yeah, we could do that! Whatta ya say? |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Bill and Sunny! What a marvelous duet you've penned. This read so melodically ... what a wonderful flow. Truly a lovely collaboration filled with romantic and tender sentiments! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi LJA.... Hey.....how about instead of a cute little kitten,(because I'm more into dogs), how about we use a big Rottweiler!!!? Then when you came over to kick it's---, it would be more of a challenge?? Seriously, my friend.....we're always glad to see you!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Kit.... It's wonderful to see you today! Thank you for such a nice reply, and we're glad that you enjoyed our duet!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, I see the magic continues. I am glad to see this. It is simply beautiful Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sandra.... Yes....I think the magic is growing!! Thank you for your support and kind words, my dear friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sunny and Bill, this is the second of your duets I have read. You two seem to fit together perfectly, wondefully done. Dee |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Dee... Thank you so much!! Bill is the inspiration on this beautiful piece, and it is always such a pleasure to 'duet' with him. We're glad you stopped by!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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