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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-09-18 02:15 AM



There you are.......

I was looking for you.......

My Heart placed a wish on a starlight......starbright

A wish kept deep inside......

There you are........

You heard my wish so far away......

Deep inside your dreams.......

There you are.......

I was looking for you........

To tell you I love you......

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Beth
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1 posted 2000-09-18 03:22 AM


~So sweet and tender.
A lovely read!!~


~Cherie~

Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-09-18 04:16 AM


yep.....that is how it started alright.LOL...lovely write.  Short , cute , and truer than you could ever know.
angelswing
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3 posted 2000-09-18 04:28 AM


I like this style, it's one that I don't hear very often, nice work . I'm glad you wrote it, it cheered me up .
Thanks . L.of.L. Tom .


Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Kethry
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4 posted 2000-09-18 04:58 AM


eyesplus2
there you are with a style and emotion to brighten my evening.
Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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5 posted 2000-09-18 07:17 AM


Eyes+2~
What a joy this little read was.
Thanks for sharing it.
I think it touches many among us tenderly.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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