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His Eyes
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His Eyes |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
His eyes full of trust, He showd me a totured soul his smile shows me sadness, his posture shows great regret. He looks at me with love in his hands, every touch, every feel Is like a dessert sunset. Too Much to handle he lets go The spark of love has shocked Him. His heart whispers out to me "Be with me for eternity." His eyes shown like an emerald, I fall into them, with each unmindful breath I take. He is unware of the storm that rages inside my Life. His eyes Tell me a story. |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Hey all who reply, please let me know is this one should be longer..thanks BirdeeB |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BirdeeB~ Nicely stated. Length is fine. Enjoyed this thought - 'His eyes shown like an emerald, I fall into them' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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