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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-09-17 07:22 PM


Nanny Nanny Boo-Boo/Poo-Poo
~*Anonymous Mama*~


Never yelling
Always telling
Nicely quelling
Nasty thoughts
Yesterday's

Nightly
Aggravation
Nearly
Nauseates
You

Boring
Outpouring
Oscillates

Brevity
Outcast
Offerings

Outreaching or
Retching

Perfectly
Ostracized
Only to

Pontificate
Over
Offered audacity

Okay, brat ... this one's for YOU !
Now quit pouting !  
~*Mom*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cuddlez
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1 posted 2000-09-17 07:55 PM


He he. Cute poem... Loved the style (Acrostic, right?)

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

juliet_2u
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2 posted 2000-09-17 07:55 PM


Oh Marge this is simply too cute and so much fun.
Juls

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-09-17 08:08 PM


Now Marge.....tell me again how to get you to do something like this again.ROFL....you are one heck of an amusement you know.  Now put your tongue back in your mouth and get your flaying fingers away from your ears and give us that Marge smile......****don't ever grow up my friend**** the world would be too boring without you.
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-09-17 09:09 PM


Cuddlez~
Yep, actually I think I'd call it
acidically acrostic ... as it fit the mood
of the challenge !  

Juliet~
Little Serenity made me do it !
She's a rascal, that one !

MarkB~
Yeah, well she called me 'smarty pants' and
challenged me !
Sooooooo .... I told her I didn't care for
poo-poo
but she just pushed my buttons !
She's a sneaky one, that Serenity !
NOW WHERE IS SHE HIDING ?
Serenity ....
Come out - come out - wherever you are !
IMP !
And, while we're at it ...
I'm NEVER gonna grow up ! !
I promise !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2000-09-17 09:21 PM


Marge~

ROFL . . . this is too funny!!!!!  That Serenity is a character!!  Love this one!

My friend, I hope you NEVER grow up.  You   are perfect just the way you are!  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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6 posted 2000-09-17 09:50 PM


(ahem) I believe the correct terminology is:

"Olly Olly Oxen Free!"

and please, don't take that for more alliteration...ROFL....I'm just luvin' you so much me Mom/Marge...you are priceless...and No One had better EVER mess with you while I'm around (serenity makes a muscle...and breaks out in a sweat...)

And since you've gone out of your way to be naughty for me, now I'll have write something nice for you...(ouch...I feel a migraine of writer's block...lol)

MUCHO HUGS TO MY CHEROKEE!!!

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-09-17 10:04 PM


LoneWolf~
She's a character alright !
I think she takes after MOM !
Thanks, gal ... not even thinking 'bout growing up !

Serenity~
LOL !
What alliteration ?
I don't see any alliteration !
Such sweet stuff Serenity !

Grrrrr !  I like the tiger in ya'.
Be good my gal !
Thanks for the FUN and being YOU !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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serenity blaze
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8 posted 2000-09-17 10:07 PM


sigh...just one last thing, if ya can stand it...I've a new motto"

AVOID ALLITERATION ALWAYS!!!!

(the devil made me do it...)

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9 posted 2000-09-17 10:22 PM


SweetSerenity~

Devil done dem deeds, dastardly !

Always allow alliteration !

Sleep sweet Serenity !

~*Mom*~ makes many musings !


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2000-09-18 12:19 PM


Lithium level getting a little low, MArgie???? What a trip you are....!
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2000-09-18 12:32 PM


Balladeer~
I'm telling ! !

Cause Serenity said -

'and No One had better EVER mess with you while I'm around
(serenity makes a muscle...and breaks out in a sweat...)'


SERENITY !
But, I think I'd LIKE it if Balladeer messed around with me !

And the answer to the question is -
YES !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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12 posted 2000-09-18 02:46 AM


All I can say is this whole thing is a hoot!!!  
Thanks Marge
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Kethry
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13 posted 2000-09-18 05:05 AM


Marge and Serenity,
this was too much. Now go to bed both of you! and I don't want to hear any giggling in the dark, you hear!
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

angelswing
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14 posted 2000-09-18 05:15 AM


Bashful,
Ranting,
Annoying,
Toddlers .

I just loved this one so much, I just thought I would reply with another acrostic . Little kids - that's right margie you keep them under check .
L.of.L. Tom .
  


Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Nan
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15 posted 2000-09-18 07:56 AM


I surely am glad that my munchkins call me Nani-Nani-Goo-Goo... There's no similarity, right???.... Cute, Marge - Really Cute!!!...
Dee
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16 posted 2000-09-19 04:14 PM


I think I got just as many laughs out of the comments as I did from the poem. That's what I like about here, you never know what you're going to see.
Dee

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17 posted 2000-09-19 04:36 PM


Okay---okay, I'm back!!!  Now Balladeer, normally we'd have to take this to the wrastlin' ring--but since I owe Marge a favor, I guess I'll just have to let ya have yer way with her!  Consider yourself lucky--(extremely so!) and no need to thank me, Marge, consider him a gift in honor of your 10,000th Post!!!  Love ya both!
Sunshine
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18 posted 2000-09-19 04:40 PM


Marge, what will you do for me if I call this ADORABLE? Something splendiferous I hope

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Nan
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19 posted 2000-09-20 07:52 AM


There's a prize for the 10,000th post??... I'm hustlin'..
LngJhnAg
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20 posted 2000-09-20 08:01 AM


Marge - I see you are feeling your oats with this poem.  I suspect 'Deer has hit the nail on the head with his diagnosis.  lol

Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2000-09-20 08:08 AM


Tracie~
Thanks Hon ... it was FUN !

Kethry~
We do giggle a lot, don't we ?

AngelSwing~
Loved your acrostic reply !

Nan~
LOL !  Glad you liked.
Kind of looks like you -  

Dee~
Me too !  LOL !

Serenity~
Hot durn !
Heaven - I'm in Heaven !

Karilea~
Hmmmm ?
Thinking cap on !

Nan-a-gin~
Whoa !  The perks of this place !  

LongJohn~
Yeah ... but you should see what I got
to take off for the examine !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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