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Sage Elizabeth
New Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 9

0 posted 2000-09-17 05:00 PM

An Hour's Time

voiced breath
upon sill into
dreams alive
at when
a wakening blankets
real with fog and mist
in air
creeping inwards
toward conscious
realm
told in ears
of years.
voiced breath
surrounding
time, whisking
skin
I'm in
curling gusts
unto the whole
absorbing
porous welcome
of completing
silver
seeping stories
slide
away.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-09-17 05:05 PM

I liked this much, sort of mysterious feel to it...Welcome to the forum, will be looking forward to reading more of your work.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2000-09-17 05:06 PM

WOW....what a beautiful verse. Loved the format and the flow was great..WELCOME TO PASSIONS....look forward to more.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-09-17 05:41 PM

SageElizabeth~
Welcome to the greatest family of poets on the Internet !
Your entrance is a lovely one with
a mysterious mood about it ...
I enjoyed it and hope to see more from you.

Enjoy your stay and read some of the works
of others so you get to know us and we get
to know you better.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2000-09-18 06:50 AM

A hearty welcome to Passions indeed - You're going to love this place, and we all look forward to reading more of your work - Check your email for a special greeting..

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

5 posted 2000-09-19 02:38 PM

A very dreamy poem, liked it alot, nice. Welcome to PAssions look forward to reading more from you.

The softest thing in the world Will overcome the hardest.Non-being can enter where there is no space". Taoist saying

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2000-09-20 08:11 AM

Welcome to passions you're gonna fit right in here. Loved your haunting poem.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

7 posted 2000-09-20 09:23 AM

Welcome to passions. Come right in and make yourself at home. Pull up a chair and stay awhile. It is a wonderful place. Loved your poem. Look forward to reading more

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2000-09-20 09:44 AM

Welcome to Passions Sage Elizabeth! This was a lovely and mystical first post, I look forward to reading more!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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