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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Gypsy Blue... You can’t figure out what life is coming to… Sitting at the window watching raindrops hit the ground... They just disappear like all the dreams you thought you’d found... Is there ever going to be a love that stays around? You feel like a clown now, Gypsy Blue... Gypsy Blue... You’re not getting younger and you know it’s true… All the pain and hunger that you’re feeling deep inside... Can’t be washed away with all the tears that you have cried... Time to look around and find a road you haven’t tried... Pick yourself back up now, Gypsy Blue... Gypsy Blue... Somewhere down the road your lover waits for you... Wrapped up safe and warm inside his heart you’ll finally be... All the seeds of love in you will bloom for him to see... He will have your heart, but he will set your spirit free... All the things you thought of love are true! He’s somewhere out there waiting,Gypsy Blue...  < !signature--> Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi SUNNY1 I am quite impressed with the style of this poem... The flow of verse and expression content how you delivered to the end of poem is a great write... Needless to say this one you've penned touches this reader and I thank you for sharing once again. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Somewhere there is a love that will see what I do Somewhere there is a man that has courage to spare Somewhere there in the future my friend Gypsy Blue There is the one that deserves your heart to share  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Coco... So good to see you here!!! Thank you, and I'm glad that you liked what you read!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Mark... Your replies always put a big smile on my face......nothing blue about that!! Thank you, my friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Borrowed a couple of your stars hope that was okay with you.  .....Thank you for always sharing your heart honestly with us. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, You are always so very open with your heart. Your poetry shows it, and you write with deep feelings. Well done Sunny, I wait for many more. Bill |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mark.... I'll share my stars with you, and if you need the sun or moon, just let me know!! I have good connections!! Hi Bill.... Thank you for your kind words...I don't know how to write from anywhere but my heart......it just happens. Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ Enjoying this one, girl ! You singing the blues ? Well, okay to sing 'em .... just don't wear 'em ! ! Good write from that little ole heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, I had missed this, I love it. What a wonderful way of expressing those feelings. Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sandra... Thank you, my very good friend...I can only speak from this gypsy heart of mine. Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You are a class act, Sunny....I can hear every poem you write singing in my head. Wonderful work.... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Mr. 'Deer'... Such wonderful words from one I respect so very much......I really am honored, and happy to have you come by to visit........my door is always open.........  < !signature-->Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Marge... You snuck in the back door when I wasn't looking!! Good to see you here, and yes, I am a blues songwriter/singer by trade. Can't help but write them, now and then!! Thank you, my friend!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
this poem was a song to me, a lonely lady blues song. i would love to hear it sung, Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi RA...(I hope you don't mind the abbreviation)... This is actually a pre-song, as I haven't put it to my synth yet for the melody. You're good girl.....are you a singer, by any chance? Thank you for coming by, and always good to meet another blues lady! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunny1 you may be singing the blues with this one but you sure ain't writing them. Unless you count the color. Nope not blue at all, red, yellow, purple, green, chartuse, silver yep and especially gold but no blue only deep soul. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lovely Sunny, this is a great poem, really love your style, as you know already. I always look out for your work because it's so inspiring, and because it's always beautiful, of course. Take care Marsha  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sunny,...how do I add to all the wonderful things that have been said? Well, first by telling you that your words sing with hope and are beautiful in their reading. You do write so well. Gypsy Blue,...what an image that brings to me,...these words play through my mind, thank you. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Kethry.... Thank you, my friend!! I was hoping the soul part would show through..... I'm glad you came by to visit!! Hi Marsha.... I thank you for such a nice reply. It's always good to see you here, and I like your style, too!! Hi SpitFire.... You always say such wonderful things, and it inspires me to do better. I think that's what this forum is all about, don't you? The feedback is so very important! I thank you!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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