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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2000-09-17 08:47 AM


Auguste's poem, "Why I Write Poetry" was so intriguing to me and brought up the question that we all must ponder once in a while.


Why Do I write poetry?

I do not write my poetry
It oozes from my pen
It flows through channels of the heart
Back to the world again

It’s not a verse that I’ve contrived
Nor notions I’ve conceived
But aesthetic songs of life's own grace  
In terms that I've believed

It’s strings of sentimental dreams
Of love that’s lost or won
Of passion’s golden quest to reach
Love’s treasure in the sun

It’s eye’s perception of the world
Poured through a prism sieve
It’s soul’s expression of the life
That it has dared to live

It jumps upon the silver page
Through keyboard’s own design
Through fingertips so unaware
The passages of time

It’s rhythm is my own life’s essence
Pulsing through the vein
It’s lyric’s of a summer song
Repeating life’s refrain

It’s phrases joined by fragile threads
And verses laced with truth
And passion for existence
And the innocence of youth

It comes not from imagination
Nor a muse’s wand
It’s simply comes from deep within
Life’s overflowing pond

The spring-fed waters never cease
They flow in times of drought
Infinity flows gently
Through the spirit’s tender spout

If one day I should write a verse
That slices through your soul
Or brings to bear a tear of joy
Or captivates your whole

If you feel you have walked the selfsame
Footsteps I have plod
Please know the verse was written
By the sacred quill of God

Then why do I write poetry?
I simply do not know
As long blood runs through my veins
I’ll let the waters flow

Elizabeth Santos

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-09-17 09:02 AM


Then why do I write poetry?
I simply do not know
As long blood runs through my veins
I’ll let the waters flow

===============
and Im grateful everyday you do..
and you are proof...
poets are born...not taught...
please.....let your "waters" wash over me
baptize me in your poetic cascade  
awesome...yes you are sweet poet
love you
me

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2000-09-17 09:15 AM


JM Thank you for being here. Miss you.
I just told a friend I couldn't write, and then Michael opened the spout again.
Your comments warm my heart
Liz

ddgoose
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3 posted 2000-09-17 09:19 AM


Liz

You wrote of many truths.  Absolutely beautiful writing.  Write more - really enjoyed this one.

                didi

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-09-17 09:58 AM


We here at Passions are SO glad you do write poetry. And it flows from you with grace and beauty - it is like YOU that way.  

RainbowGirl
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5 posted 2000-09-17 10:07 AM


Beautiful, Liz, just like you..

HUSG

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You'll always be where you are right now."

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WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-09-17 10:15 AM


Liz, you've summed it up beautifully!

I couldn't have done a better job!

"If you feel you have walked the selfsame
Footsteps I have plod
Please know the verse was written
By the sacred quill of God"

So true these words! ~Hugs~



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Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2000-09-17 10:42 AM


Elizabeth,
Your comming close to the record for epopee.
A lovely poem. Love Sy

Paula Finn
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8 posted 2000-09-17 10:55 AM


Liz...oh yes this is why we write...not because we want to necessarily...it just happens...something you see something you hear and here come the words just pouring out. This is an amazing work of art.
Martie
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9 posted 2000-09-17 10:57 AM


Liz--To read your poetry always touches me in one of the ways you have described...your grace of word comes from your grace of heart...this is a wonderful poem!
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10 posted 2000-09-17 12:28 PM


Liz,

That something I wrote was able to inspire you to create this truly lovely poem is enough in itself.  I see so much beauty here so openly exposing the mind and heart of the poet, so eloquently describing why it is we write.  Enjoy the day, my friend.

Michael


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Auguste
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11 posted 2000-09-17 03:48 PM


Let us send this one around one more time.  It's always interesting to see the different reasons that we as poets feel we must write.  


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Kethry
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12 posted 2000-09-17 04:06 PM


Captivating, Liz
Truly inspired. Michael also inspired one for me when he wrote last post. It's more fitting for now so I'm posting it today.
Really liked this poem.

Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Denise
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13 posted 2000-09-17 08:28 PM


And you do it so well, Elizabeth!  

Denise

Rosebud1229
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14 posted 2000-09-17 11:37 PM


so beautiful Elizabeth, It's so true, that there's a hunger that must be filled, It's something that opens are hearts, where we thought was never possible, opens many doors, that were shut, It revives our souls and minds. It's art that forms a picture in our minds.
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