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Parker
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0 posted 2000-09-16 11:59 PM


Passions Flavor
Senryu format..

Drink of loves wet kiss
When gates of passion run deep
To taste the sweetness

Where lips and skin meet
Aromas of raging need
Satisfy the want

Deep is deep the need
You the feast of flavored dreams
On my passions plate.

Parker (c)2000

Thanks dgvarner for the inspirations.    



[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 09-17-2000).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-09-17 12:12 PM


Hey you...what's up?

LOL...now this, THIS, is truly inspirational...mmm...Mmm...Hmmm...

Balladeer
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2 posted 2000-09-17 12:20 PM


I think what's up is obvious LOL!!!

This style favors you, PArker....

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-09-17 12:55 PM


Parker~

Passion's flower blooms
Touched with soft kiss of desire
Igniting the fire


~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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EagleOne
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4 posted 2000-09-17 01:23 AM


Wow! That is some inspiration you have. These are great!!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-09-17 01:24 AM


Ummmmm is anyone else in here feeling warm
me thinks me has the vapors ...LOL
mmm mmm mmm nicey and spicy P-man
love ya when your a lusty-gator *smile*
nice to see you "playing with your poetry"
again    
LOL at Balladeer.. and "whats up"
see what you started Parker-baby
JUST DONT STOP  
hehehe
me
************
lust and need
passion and desire
moth to flame
~*~
eyes connect
temptation of ache
sigh on sigh
~*~

(a couple of quickies) haha

tracie66
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6 posted 2000-09-17 02:44 AM


Hey this is fantastic
a lovely read Parker  
~Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Parker
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7 posted 2000-09-17 12:39 PM


serenity, oh everything is up.... thank you sweets...  

Bal.... thank you for that... dear  

Marge, you make wonderful response senryu's, thank you dear lady, and for the mention of that other poem it was adorable.    

EagleOne, thank you, its them passionette poets in the pub...  

Janet, you come buy just for some quickies, drop by anytime...  

Tracie... thank you very much...  

Parker

Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2000-09-17 12:55 PM



Passionate poet  
dancing on heart merrily
singing now of love
~~~~~*~~~~~



Poet knows his heart
pounding poetic cadence
as passion consumes

~~~~~*~~~~~



Parker falling fast
kissing stars delightfully
soaring into love





excellent senyrus my man....don't you just love what LOVE can do to you?      Happy to see you there.  



[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-17-2000).]
Honeybee
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9 posted 2000-09-17 01:17 PM



Wow!  Very well written, sensual and hot!!!!    Go Parker go!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



Jenn E
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10 posted 2000-09-17 01:31 PM


Mmmmmmmmmmmmm, I gotta tell ya this was fleshly plesuarable!!!!!   ............

I have been away far to long, look at what I almost missed. Hope all is well.......delectable read here.  
Jenn E

Corinne
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11 posted 2000-09-17 01:33 PM


Up, up and away, yeppers, this one's hot alright!

Corinne

Parker
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12 posted 2000-09-17 03:57 PM


Mark, mine in this case is just the love of life and the passion I see in other poets words. one day I hope to write from my own heart again. Untill then I'll have to borrow from all of you... thank you for your words good poet.  

Melissa, i'm going but where should I go... address please...  

Jenn E, hmmmm like the sound of that fleshly pleasurable. Well a very fleshly thank you sweety.  

Corinne, I doubt it be too hot for you sweet poet.  

Parker

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