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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Spirits Seeking ~*Marge Tindal*~ Troublesome trials terribly troubled Thrice-traveled tears trek trails through timeless terrain's Time-tinged transparencies topple tumultuously tripping thus this traveler again and again Against all accumulated agonies amassed ages ago Acute awareness abounds among awesome actualities Awash amid aged allegories aching aching aching Cherokee chieftains council cascading centuries calling calmly culminating Perpetual Peace ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
OHHHH nooooo not again.LOL.....I will be back to you white feathers.  cheeeeeeezzzzzz |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge* It amazes me how you can use this form and still send a powerful poem out...of course I should be used to you amazing me  ....but I've got a hard head...just ask...I'm sure someone will agree  ...((hugs)) sweet poet, I enjoyed this very much~ |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
WWWOOOOWWWWW....wonderful!!!! Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Now where are you off to, Cowboy ? Tee-Hee !  ButterfliesDC~ You're so cute - what with that 'hard head' and all ! You tickle me. Have you seen a maniacal cowboy out riding the range trying to 'round-up' some fancy words ? Where'd that rascal go ? Bonnie~ Well, I do like your WOW ! Thanks, friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another creative marvel, Marge! Very well done! Denise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Lyrically Lovely, Languidly Lucid-- Love ya Lots, Lady!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you, my friend. The spirits seek my ink and write what they will. I'm glad to share with others. Serenity~ Sweetly sung songs strings softly strumming stirring spirited souls surrender soon seen stretching southward sending Serenity ~*Someone's Spirit*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay...that's the last time I try THAT with the likes of you...UNCLE!!! And I'm saving this page, just to keep that reply! Hugs, and thanks again! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Great poem, Marge!! "time-tinged transparencies topple tumultuously tripping thus this traveler again and again" I love that part!! Your messages are so wonderfully colorful. (I'd put in a smiley face, but I'm not familiar with those yet!!) sp |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Shame shadows some Ugly Uncles unite Carrying carefree casual Kinky kites Soaring High Up High ? *I just love you to pieces ! SnowPants~ Don't mind us ... we're midnight-demented ! Thank you for enjoying what I get so much pleasure out of doing. Now when you reply - look under the posting window and you'll see a link that says Available Smilies ... click on it and you'll find the secrets to the smiles ! You should be a pro before this night is over ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wonderful! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
The teens I know frequently say "totally awesome". This is the 1st time I felt the two words were 'totally appropriate' ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Marge The spirits travel far and wide and you have captured the spirit within this piece....well done my friend Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ Thank you sincerely for that wonderful compliment. I appreciate it so very much. Tracie~ Your spirit travels all the way to my heart. It's always so wonderful to see you've been here in the night. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Marge You are marvelous - cannot wait for more. Hurry, Hurry! didi |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge this is yet another marvellous poem. I'm in awe of your writing ability, totally dumstruck. Love this beauty.  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Amongst agates are ashes airing accumulated agonies aging agaist actualities after all aches amassed Wisdom wise warriors with wealth weilding wildly whence war was won Cherokee chieftains calling council could chill cascading cadence capturing centuries claim... calling children's chances calmly cheated Perpetual Peace perceived per pouring ponderings pleasing poets. Lovely write My friend....you know I love it when you do this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DiDi~ Thank you, my friend. Want more ? Visit the archives ... they're loaded ! Marsha~ I appreciate such a nice compliment. The joy in knowing others enjoy what I love doing is exhilarating. MarkB~ YOU love it ??? I LOVE IT !!! You take inspiration and run it the length of your heart. This is a WONDERFUL reply, my dear. I love it when you feel CHALLENGED ... Wanna arm-wrestle ? Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I have no magic words...just my sincere appreciation for who you are...love this poem! and Mark...bravo reply! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...again you amaze me |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Awesome alliteration, Marge! ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
What can a person say.......WOW!!! Jenn E |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gal, every word you've got is magic ! Thank you. And didn't our friend, Mark, just shine ! Paula~ Thanks, hon. It was a gift from peace-seeking spirits. Glad you enjoyed it. Chanson~ Thanks for thinking so. I appreciate your thoughts. JennE~ WOW works just fine ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
feathers flowing fully following full fashion forceably forever flying for friends white whispers will weild wonders with wonderous writings as another age acts accordingly against aimless accusations and amidst ageless alliterations Cherokee children cherish conquest considering cold chills carved crudely containing childish conquering Love you much "White Feathers" [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-18-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Hmmmmm Marge he seems to be roping more fancy words....you want me to take that laso away from him?? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ Mark~ Mark~ You just don't know when to quit - do ya' ? Okay ! Wonderful Wistful Wandering words Wafting woefully Without wailing Whatever will we wish we were wearing when wee wittle wascals welcome wus wif wet willies ? ? ? ? ? LOL ! *Butterflies~ Snatch that lasso and tie that bandito up ! He's dangerous I tell ya'. But ... at least we know how he spends his nights ! Keeps him busy and out of trouble ! Heck of a way to spend my lunch break ! ! But, shucks .... Love ya' both ! ! Now ... cowboy ... hit the trail ! Skeedaddle on outta here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
AAAHHHHHHH You just took away my play time....darn you.  Well if that is the way you want it then fine...brat ....and you think Serenity was bad!!! Just one last thing thoughMarge makes Mark mosey mercylessy mopeing missing Monday's more magical moments. SO THERE YOU!!!!!    |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Duet duos do enlighten enthusastically each, every enigma so subtly, shhhhh magical moments mystically appear, apropos. To Marge, Mark, I tip my quill...< !signature--> Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-18-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
okay so you had butterfly tie me up... And you think I would complain... WHY????? cowboy is in heaven now...whew. Thanks White Feathers you just made my day by having her do that...YYYYEEEEEEhhhhhaaaaaaahhhh ride-em butterfly. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Well once again I'm totally amazed. Marge you are simply incredible. Juls |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Madam Marge ... simply stupendous! Amazing how you kept the flow both creative and meaningful while weaving all these wonderful alliterations. Excellent work my friend! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Marvelous moving meaninful work, wonderful woman!!! Thia was awesome, my friend. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
OOPS!!! Got ya twice!!!! LW [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 09-18-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
OH MARGE HON'!!!!! wanna play some more???? |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Tumultuously Adroit Capitulation... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You're a sweetie. Thanks, gal ! MarkB~ Yeah ? Well, mail the check !! Juliet~ I love your 'amaze'. Kit~ Thank ya', doll ! LoneWolf~ Twice is nice ! Thanks ! MarkB~ Here I was poised to reply ... Funny how you just stopped by But I've got this little quirk ... They expect me to show up at WORK ! Later, my friend ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
whooooooeeee! loved the original and the replies and the repartee. Amazing, astounding, alliteration. Kethry, Kowers, Kravenly,Kursing Chief! Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wow, Marge, great work on this! I'm sure the spirits heard every word, too, they always do! Corinne |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
there is NO WAY I am gonna get lured into this style of poetry. I can see it now... something about kicking kitties... urk! It's inciting irresistable insistences... great work here |
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