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Kethry
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0 posted 2000-09-16 10:08 PM


Trust is such a simple word, used too often though
Relationships depend on it, to make the passion flow
Understanding comes from trust, it's something we all know
Still we open our hearts hoping with trust, to see love grow
Till once again we move along, begin to trust in seeds we sow




"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

© Copyright 2000 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-16 10:23 PM


Beautiful acrostic loved it much.
Wilfred Yeats
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2 posted 2000-09-17 01:04 AM


so true - and well done too ~S~
EagleOne
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3 posted 2000-09-17 01:31 AM


I agree! Very true, and very well done. Without trust you have nothing!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

snowpants
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4 posted 2000-09-17 02:04 AM


I really enjoyed it!  Thanks for the extra emphasis on trust!!  Some people tend to forget that...

sp

Victoria
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5 posted 2000-09-17 03:20 PM


Yes if there is not trust, then why
bother..   nice one

Kethry
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6 posted 2000-09-17 04:18 PM


Mark, thank you for your kind words.

Wilfred, thanks for responding and the smile.

Eagleone, thanks for the well done.

snowpants, thanks for the response. I beleive trust is important.

Victoria, thanks so much for stopping by.

Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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