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X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon

0 posted 2000-09-16 07:33 PM


rain beating a tin drum
above my head
where I lay
sleep hovering near
warmth seeping through me
the duvet settling across my form
eyelids fluttering in a mild effort
to stave off the night
as I nestle into my pillow
dreams, but a hairbreadth away
drifting into sweet repose
and wistful dreams of you


© Copyright 2000 Heather Walters - All Rights Reserved
Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
1 posted 2000-09-16 08:06 PM


I can only tell you - it is how I get to sleep most nights - - beautiful write X Angel
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
2 posted 2000-09-16 09:00 PM


heather... the most important thing is getting enough sleep... LOL... seriously.. i mean it!!! and it's hard to do... especially under the circumstances... i'm glad you have your duvet.. and i had to look up the word because my vocabulary isn't that good... hehe

i enjoyed this one, my poet friend... thank you for a very mellow and comforting read.  

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