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Wrapped In Glass
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Wrapped In Glass |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Wrapped In Glass Neatly wrapped in glass hush-hush words, strangle to silence a fragile heart love cast aside, on a lonesome beach Midnight sun, turns the tide etched in glass, new words fitly spoken, in silver and gold certain love will grow A reason to live, tossed in reply this bottle of glass... an enchanted thing, wrapped in glass BloomingRose |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BloomingRose, A beautiful poem wrapped in glass. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
BloomingRose.... This is a most enchanted poem!! Lovely thoughts, especially to a glass collector like myself!! Very Nice!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Seymour, thanks I am not sure where this one came from...but thanks Sunny, glad you like it.  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A letter of love etched in time Read by all who visit the sea No ink of pen or paper in rhyme What is there is so easy to see Memories of one and so many more Wrapped in glass so finely blown Washed up onto the lonely shore Where tomorrows love will surely be grown Beautifully done and eloquently spoken. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A reason to live, tossed in reply this bottle of glass... an enchanted thing, wrapped in glass Beautiful words delicately crafted.. wonderful poem The softest thing in the world Will overcome the hardest.Non-being can enter where there is no space". Taoist saying |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Bumping as it needs to be read by more. Too lovely of a write not to be seen. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
a well written and emotion evoking piece. thanks for the read |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ I enjoyed the fragility of the words 'wrapped in glass'. Very thought-provoking and I like it when a writing can accomplish that. Glad you shared it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sage Elizabeth New Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 9 |
BloomingRose, "Neatly wrapped in glass", such an image this brings to me.Your poem is beautiful and I'm glad that I stopped in on it. Sage |
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