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A Simple Humbling Word, Help!
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A Simple Humbling Word, Help! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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A Simple Humbling Word, Help! My spirit sadden, heavily laden, needing relief or down to Sheol my path will end too soon. Last plea for help I send upward as tears fall downward in dull droplets to waste away frivolously. Feeling a soft cooling breeze all about my presence and a sense a refreshing relief, bewilderment sets in? What is this unseen force that can uplift a soul in deep regret? Has my plea fallen on open ear? Soon free’ness becomes know once more to this withering state giving drenching love the power to heal. Having the power to once again breath fresh air deep into this soul of mine I once again have a plea of sorts. This time looking upward to the heavens and shedding tears brightly lit in loves gleam I on bent knee begin my prayer. Thanking in a much humble state I give thanks to the angel’s descent and to the One who sent them to me. I did not believe in the power you possessed, forgetting what had been learned, but “oh” so forgiving your ways are all that was needed a simple and humbling word, help! By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My sweet Cerenity~ You've but to extend the plea and He listens. This is so affirming of your faith and your willingness to seek Him. What a lovely offering of yourself to us. I got immense serenity from reading it. Love and hugs, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautifully penned and so very inspirational. Excellent write |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge and Mark Life has a way of reminding us how so very fragile we are from time to time and this seems to be when we forget who to turn to, or at least in my case I get all caught up in lifes pains and seem to have no where to turn until I remember the one that has got me this far with loving care. Thank you both. Love Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cerenity, my friend this is a beautiful piece and while I do not believe in a God a such I still believe it is important to turn to something/someone for inspiration for comfort. Wonderfully written piece. The softest thing in the world Will overcome the hardest.Non-being can enter where there is no space". Taoist saying |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Brian, Thank you friend, inspiration can come from just about anything, why just the other night I painted my toe nails and was inspired to dance the night away, hehe (~.~), joking aside I do understand just what you mean. Love ya, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Cerenity, this is a wonderful piece. . . we can find comfort in Him and know that we will be loved. . . Excellent my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, Thank you friend, your right about Him loving unconditionally, some times I try to stand on my own but always in the end I find myself looking twards Him for help and I guess that means im human and do need Him and am not afraid to admit it, thank you again. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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