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Good-byes (for Cuddlez)

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WhtDove
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0 posted 09-15-2000 08:56 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Soon you will be leaving
And I'll have to say good-bye
When it's time for us to part
The tears will fill my eyes

Everytime I turn around
Your reflection I will see
Looking from the window
Just staring back at me

I'll turn ever so quickly
In hopes to find you there
And pray that you remember
Just how much for you I care

I hope that you'll always know
You forever have a part
A really special place
Down deep within my heart

Know that as you walk away
My fragile heart will break
And as my tears start falling
My shoulders will gently shake

Good-byes are never easy
Though my heart is rent in two
The times we've had I'll cherish
Cause I learned of love from you
© Copyright 2000 WhtDove - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 09-15-2000 09:09 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

WhtDove,
How familiar does the sound of this smack.  Send him the poem and he'll come flying back
Wonderful writing.
WhtDove
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2 posted 09-15-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you so much Sy!
This wasn't about me though LOL...I only wish it worked so easily LOL
Cuddlez
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3 posted 09-15-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Thanks so much Rebecca... Yup, you captured those feelings great...
For everyone who wondered, I -jokingly- asked WhtDove if she could write me a poem about goodbyes, and she cheerfully obliged coming up with this lovely poem ).
I like it a lot, captured so much of it I don't know what to say...

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
WhtDove
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4 posted 09-16-2000 09:11 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Amber you're more than welcome!
I'm glad you liked the outcome  

Anytime, it was a challenge and I needed that too  
Denise
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5 posted 09-16-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I could have sworn that I replied to this when I read it last night (?) Am I getting senile now? Well, what I thought I had said last night was "This is absolutely beautiful Rebecca! So glad to see you writing again! Encore, Encore!!"  

Denise
Kethry
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6 posted 09-16-2000 09:22 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Rebecca, good poem strong on passion.
Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-
serenity blaze
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7 posted 09-16-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is so perfectly you, Dovie!!!  You never fail to make me smile...I thank you for that, and for this as well...a WOOHOO back to you!!!
Cuddlez
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Walla Walla, WA 99362


8 posted 09-16-2000 01:45 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

See, I get to send this one back to the top all on my own. Told you it was good Rebecca... Everyone else though so too ). Guess I'll have to find more challenges for you...

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
juliet_2u
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9 posted 09-16-2000 04:18 PM       View Profile for juliet_2u   Email juliet_2u   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juliet_2u

Rebecca you served your friend well with this. Ya had me almost in tears for cryin out loud, hehe. Great job my friend.
Juls
WhtDove
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10 posted 09-16-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

ROFL Denise! No senility yet. You replied to a different poem of mine. LOL LOL

Kethry glad you enjoyed.

LOL Karen! You got me smiling too...thanks sweetie!  

Cuddlez I'd love more challenges  
Thank you  

Juls, if it almost brought you to tears, then it's better than I thought.  
Thank you so much!
Cuddlez
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11 posted 09-17-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

WhtDove: Another challenge. Since we both have border collie crosses why not write a poem about them (or all dogs) and their boundless energy... Sure to be great for all involved. My puppy went to her first horse show today...

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
snowpants
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12 posted 09-17-2000 01:42 AM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

I absolutely loved this one!  Definitely hit the nail on the head there!  

sp
WhtDove
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13 posted 09-17-2000 10:10 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Amber good challenge, I know I wrote one about her and the balloons. I think I titled it "Kodak Moment."  Not sure, I'll have to look that one up. Maybe it will be appropriate, and maybe I'll have to write another one.    Thanks

Snowpants (love that name)  
I'm glad you enjoyed it, not sure I'm happy that anyone can relate to it though, if ya know what I mean.  We all cross those moments in our life, and they're never easy.
Thank you!
Bill Charles
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since 07-11-2000
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highways, & byways, for now


14 posted 09-17-2000 11:28 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Good morning WhtDove,
To write about a friend is a cherished thing to do. And you have done it so very well. I commend you on this writing.

Bill
Jenn E
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since 08-02-2000
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15 posted 09-17-2000 11:48 AM       View Profile for Jenn E   Email Jenn E   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn E

This was very sweet........saying good bye is never easy...As sad as it is you radiate strength at the end.......  Very nice..  
Jenn E
Cuddlez
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Walla Walla, WA 99362


16 posted 09-17-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Found it WHTDOV: My dog lucky in Open #6...

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
CrazyChick
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17 posted 09-18-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

very touching poem.....great job    
WhtDove
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18 posted 09-18-2000 08:58 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Bill thank you for such a wonderful comment!  

Jenn E thank you. I'm glad you found strength in it.

Amber so what did you think? LOL

CrazyChick thanks so much!
passing shadows
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19 posted 02-07-2005 11:03 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yes
*sigh*
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