»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #9
»
An Ivory Moon
| Open Poetry #9 |
|
An Ivory Moon |
|
|
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
An Ivory MoonBefore the day awakened fully we found ourselves breathless beneath an ivory moon. Translucent almost, it shone just for us, morning's mantle placed just so, bathed only in radiant reflection of our own luminous glow. [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 09-15-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Meadowmuse - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
wow this was ethereal  ~Heather |
||
|
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Claire~ This was just beautiful and so eloquently penned Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey....that sounds just like the moon my baby and I shared the other night!!!!!  Lovely read and so full of passionate thoughts. |
||
|
Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
The replies I get tell me I write "hot" but if anyone were to ask me what I think is 'hot' This would be a prime example-. Perhaps it is not the best choice of words for so sensuous a piece - but I only know how it affects me. - now when you're ready for a few more paragraphs - I will tell you how lovely it is... |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Claire! Absolutely lovely! Denise |
||
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Claire, this transports one to another world. . . Excellent writing my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
|
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Heather, your "wow" gave me this smile...thank you! Melissa, thank you so much for your encouraging response! Mark, I have a feeling it just may have been that very same moon. Enchanting, wasn't it? Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed reading! Bill, I must thank you, in earnest, for your gracious commentary. To my way of thinking, passion can be expressed in so many ways...thank you for so kindly endorsing my simple style. Denise, your approval of this piece is very much appreciated...thank you! Sven, one of the many wonders of poetry is just that, I believe...transporting the reader into a suggested scene. Thank you so much for "going there" and your sweet words to me, my friend... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Claire....this is so enchanting and captivating...I love it! |
||
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Claire, I see you managed to pull it off after all and what a wonderful job you managed to do...this is perfectly lovely, my friend. It's so very pretty Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Claire, what a weaver of love and passion you are! I'm on fire here....  |
||
|
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Balladeer, fire is good...thanks for reading. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A desirable and lovely occasion...James |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ Ivory ... what a lovely shade of moonglow. Perfectly set aglow. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
