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My most romantic ever
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My most romantic ever |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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The Time Has Come As I sit here watching you sleep With a look so peaceful on your face My heart is filled with amazement As I look back at how we got to this place You say you'll always love me And I can feel that when we touch It's a promise that I've lived for One we both wanted so much So many miles between us Our hearts only moments apart This love we've found is meant to be We knew that from the start We were both once just a name Two lonely hearts behind a screen Two hearts that fate brought together 'Cause we dared to chase a dream Together we drank from cupid's cup And tasted love so sweet Everything I have I give to you I've placed it at your feet For in my heart I know I've found The love we were meant to share And you were there all along Just waiting for me there So, now I watch you sleeping And wait for you to wake As I try to gather courage For this chance I am about to take The time has come for me to ask That you become my wife To wake with me each morning To share the rest of my life |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*sigh* so this is true yes? sounds wunnerful, good luck!  ~H |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Purrr.... Very sweet and loving Jeffrey! I like a lot! Marie~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
sigh...beautiful Jeff, so very beautiful |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thanks you all....true? maybe soon but not quite yet  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Just the most romantic thoughts from you. A pleasure to see in your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you Marge . It is always good to come in and read your replies to my work. |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Stunning....Absolutely Stunning.. I simply adored this piece!~ ~Cherie~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh my Jeffrey, better not let her read this one till you are really ready! Soooooo romantic *big sigh*  Deb |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Jeffrey, I hope she says yes when you finally pop the question. Beautiful poem! Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Jeffrey You have put your heart and soul in your writing and it is absolutely beautiful. It has us all dreaming, purrrrrrrrr. didi |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I just had to come back...this is too beautiful to read just once. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jeffrey~ This is just so beautiful, I hope everything turns out just grand Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
it is indeed your most romantic yet Jeffery. You have penned this moment beautifully. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Most Romantic..Yes and very breath taking. You go boy..Hope she says yes |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Jef, its true there is love and romance just beyond the glow... great writing. Parker |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was such a beautiful display of that precious emotion called "love". I always enjoy the flow of your poetry. One never knows these days if a poet writes his or her emotions or just the emotion in general......but this was so romantic.........and the type of love you speak is one I understand and treasure. Wonderful write. Jenn E |
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