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The Wait Of Dreams
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The Wait Of Dreams |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
These dimly sensed portals ethereal dreams wrent fabric of mortals apart at the seams As now inter-woven they thread the minds eye entreating the cosmos they ask "Who am I?" As memories merge an infusion of doubt inks patterned illusions with voices that shout in languages long from this place disappeared petitioners all asking " Why am I here ?" To hear but an echo that sounds from with-in "Your time for these answers is yet to begin" Soft spun subtl'y shaded hues ever so slight are loomed on the frame-work by shuttles of light. Perhaps X Angel , we have met before... Doc [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Yours is the type of poetry I'd like to read aloud, or have read aloud to me. Tis very smooth and soothing.  And yes, Dear Moose, I think we have....I'll put my sleuth cap on and figure out just when and where. *sly grin* ~Heather |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Soft spun subtl'y shaded hues ever so slight are loomed on the frame-work by shuttles of light." THIS is poetry, entirely and in full. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh yes this is completely lovely. Your pen has served you well. Juls |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This flows beautifully and touches deeply. *S* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Silky smooth, Doc! Denise |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
X Angel, As you can tell from the footnote , it was your reply to a previous work that inspired this .I would much rather continue to believe that there is more to our reality than what what we percieve through our senses .Thanks. Claire, A wonderful compliment,coming from one whose works I admire so much . juliet_2u, Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed suthern, Very kind words , thanks d, Another early morning piece , sometimes I think I write better when I'm half asleep(yawn).Thank you |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'll have to try that sometime, Doc!  Denise |
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