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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-09-15 02:11 PM


Vanilla Silk On A Windy Hill


Once on a windy hill
trees swayed slowly in summers breeze
high grass, hidden kiss
vanilla silken hands caress lips
near the brink of burst
love entwines the heart

Never let go, till we are gone
beads of sweetness blend
with vanilla rippened kiss
encircle the mind with this blinding bliss

Our wedding vows stood the test of time
vanilla silk lovers hands
touch once more...
on a high and windy hill

BloomingRose  



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-09-15 08:06 PM


This is very beautiful, BloomingRose!

Denise

Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-09-15 08:11 PM


Very sweet and tender. Lovely read.
WhtDove
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3 posted 2000-09-15 09:33 PM


I'm breathing in that scent of Vanilla!
Very well written and tender!

BloomingRose
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4 posted 2000-09-16 09:13 AM


Denise... Thanks, glad you liked it. (my sister's name is Denise)

Mark... Thank you for reading. You comments are most welcome.  

WhtDove... Vanilla and love blend somehow don't they? Thanks for your kind words.



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5 posted 2001-02-17 09:44 PM


BloomingRose~
What lovely thoughts and scents this brought to mind.
~*Marge*~



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