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Corazon
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0 posted 2000-09-15 12:56 PM


ok, another no need to comment one.....antivenum of a different sort

Tipadilly tatoo

my shoes scattered and skipped
through the tall green grass
my head far up in the clouds
I was lost to the day until
I happened upon an mystical sign
to the left of my intended path
Tipadilly Tatoo
I could not help myself as
in I went and took a seat
he placed his books of desire
in my hands
and I paged and paged
but to no avail
my heart’s desire
was not in his magic realm
Tipadilly tired
of waiting
and questioned of me
what lies here?
and he gestured over my heart
and a slow smile spread
as I pulled out a picture of
you and he sighed, This one?
he is your heart's desire?
I nodded
and bared my heart
I closed my eyes expecting the pain
but soft was his touch
as indelibly he inked my heart
I left
my feet barely grazing the grass
tips, I glanced back
and was not surprised
naught but an empty woods
but my heart
beating much too hard
feeling twice its size
and very warm
was evidence
enough
to know that you have
forever been written
into my heart

© Copyright 2000 zoe d. - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 2000-09-15 05:40 PM


Maybe there's no NEED to comment but I'm gonna anyway....it think it's excellent writing....so sue me!
doreen peri
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2 posted 2000-09-15 05:53 PM


quote:
but my heart
beating much too hard
feeling twice its size
and very warm



excellent writing, girl! wow!  

Martie
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3 posted 2000-09-15 06:30 PM


Corazon--I liked this very much, I did.... surreal, mystical, romantic is my non comment.
Corazon
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4 posted 2000-09-20 02:47 PM


ok I know bringing up the dead, but I forgot about this one, and wanted to say thanks for your non comments, you are all sweet  
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