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The Kiss
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The Kiss |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Kiss She walks the beauty of beware Sculptured in the shape of dare. Anointed with a grace and charm That can befuddle with alarm. The options toast too hot to touch Suggesting they could be too much. Yet I in foolish charged full force Rode down the hot bed of the course. If cowards die to every wile And brave men only once in style Then I would stay the dragons lair And try my luck at lady fair. A state of amnesty I seek Just to give my heart a peek These solitary quills of joint Yet a quill is still a point. And so I plunged the love abyss And fell forever on the kiss. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Seymour ... nice rhythm and touch ... nice |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How did this little gem slip throough? A beautiful poem If brave men die once in style, they loved better and will be remembered longer. There's nothing to lose in a kiss This is so well penned Liz |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely..enjoyed..  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No, Elizabeth, it didn't slip through, it's being tenderly held in the hands of those in the know!...well done, Sy...wonderful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MA Miller, Nice comment, thank you. Elizabeth, A rose from my favorite poetess. Thank you. Sy Victoria, Lovely comment thank you. Sunshine, Your comment lit up my computor. *L* Sy |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Sy... You do with words, what an artist do with colors...Here`s to you my friend... -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I thought it was going to be about Al and Tipper! You have some excellent lines here, Sy...it's very Tabinesque - and that's good! |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
Lips like rubys eyes like pearls this temptess divine ... has Sy doing poetic twirls take the chance take the dare lifes too short in love and lips ... all is fair go for the passion taste her gifts of bliss throw caution to the wind for goodness sake ... GIVE HER THE KISS  ================ If cowards die to every wile And brave men only once in style Then I would stay the dragons lair And try my luck at lady fair. A state of amnesty I seek Just to give my heart a peek These solitary quills of joint Yet a quill is still a point. And so I plunged the love abyss And fell forever on the kiss. ************ the only thing cooler than these lines and rhyme is the poet... *winkie winkie* this one goes in my library file (under G for gator) LOL *kiss kiss* my sister is the poet I am but a shadow. by the light of poetry I read then dream |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Lovely There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Exquisitely done and so full of imagery of the heart. Well done. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Your words enchant, Seymour. ~ Claire |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Wow, I loved! Conjured up some great images here. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Shadow of poetry, You are my shadow of delight. Maria, Thank you. Mark, Thank you for the well done. Claire, Enchanting comment. Gemini, Thank you for the wow. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
no fooling? May our Sun shine on you, my friend...you, and you artistry of words... I need to go into the archives, I've not read all you've done...I apologize for that... hugs, Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, If you go back into the archives you'll give me a sun burn. LOL *L* Sy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, I think I may be,...up to the challenge... get 30 SPF...or whatever it's called...ready! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sy you captured me with rhythm and rhyme and every meaning in every line! Love it! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I've done this before and I'll do it again....Sy...sigh!!! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
well now... fell forever on this kiss, where is my fan! Romance is in the air. Deb |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
hey Sy baby...ya know what they say... only the shadow knows *smile*(hehe) meet me in the 5 oclock shadow LOL *wink wink* me thinks this kiss was too much for me  made me delightfully delirious... sorta like a butterfly kiss... or a gator smooch LOL (can you tell its a full moon) goodnight sweet SY. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Sometimes the best kiss Comes froms those aware of their lips If you are going to fall into the chasm with the kiss then you might as well really go for it, and it sounds like you have.... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
You do have a way with words. This is wonderful. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this was very sweet Sy, I loved it! ~Heather |
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grandiloquent Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 104Midwest America |
oooo *delicious little chills*. Indulgent. [This message has been edited by grandiloquent (edited 09-16-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Nothing as sweet as love in repeat Begun like this in the bliss of a kiss 'And so I plunged the love abyss And fell forever on the kiss.' You are the CHAMPION ! Love you, sweet romantic poet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Every word is a gem, displayed to perfection by a master! *S* This is beautiful, Seymour! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I'll have to get some sun tan lotion *L* WhtDove, Sweet comment, thank you. Martie, I love when you sigh. *L* BloomingRose, Enjoyed your comment. Shadow of poetry, as long as the shadow knows, it's ok. Cuddley, You could be right, thanks. Eloise, Thank you for the wonderful. X Angel, Thank you Heather. Grandiloquent, Thanks for the delicious. Marge, And I love you too. Suthern, As beautiful as you? |
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