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Examination of middle life. with Poutprincess
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Examination of middle life. with Poutprincess |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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Examination of middle life < !signature-->Through the eye of a needle by brian madden and Poutprincess ======================== juice breaks….. caught in kitchen sink with turnip mines and a juice break radiowave coming through anorexics and disco ball dogs wear Saturn's rings it tutu pink kissing klits of intellect and frown with smiles at dinner bell Sunday sun up/ pu nus yadirf 30 second sonic colonic proffession Where Dali's in parsley with Johnny Arabia i said i cant keep up! Blahblahblahblahblahblah Waltzing wonderkids on suicide balloon sushi ticket to ice capades tea cup brawl Linoleum monsters of road rage poked out mowing puddles to fine grade sandcastle stones Infant princesses sold to businessmen at airports five dollar bumble bee sobriety Washing machine drunk kills baby in housefly dream sunsets over sleepless parks loves in hand hyper active trance This is the hour when the mysteries emerge A strangeness so hard to reflect A moment so moving goes straight to your heart" JOy divison [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 09-14-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Brian, I was so anxious to read this one, but you see, I'm just a tad past middle age and I can't make out the words, for the font color is too light . I bet it's a good one, too. Liz |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
nice. a confusing aray of word play. Well done. I enjoyed this it made me laugh. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
well brian, looks like this one has fallen back, so im bringing it up to share the fun a little more! *smile* im shameless, i know!  ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
This one takes a lot of thinking about, you set a great area of confusing statements into text very well . And although it has taken a long while I think that it is possible to unravel it . Thanks a lot . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
It sure says all the title offers to say... wonderful work... brian and dawn... regards, sudhir |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Well thanks to everyone who read this piece, I hope you all enjoyed this unique interactive experience. The only explanation I can offer is the following taken from the poem "Salutation," gratuitous self quoting here. "Still is an abstract statement a statement of less intent? I am pondering as pondering be word play and fore lesson slay, nonsense speak still I say broken wisdom is this tighter more displaced discipline an attempt at forth failed revolution," This is the hour when the mysteries emerge A strangeness so hard to reflect A moment so moving goes straight to your heart" JOy divison |
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