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jlocke
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0 posted 2000-09-14 02:21 PM



I found my true love
She goes by one name
It is April
How it drives me insane

I tell her she’s beautiful
My love is for her
But the situation is pitiful
I am very disturbed

My love is forbidden
For she is married
My hate is not hidden
I wish he were buried

Of her he abuses
Both body and mind
He leaves her in bruises
And won’t let her shine

His love fills her
To the point that she’s hollow
Of his love,
Why does she swallow?

She lives in a world
Of shattered dreams
No more does she see beauty
Nothing is, as it seems

She needs to get away
Even if it’s not to me
But for her own sake
She needs to be free

She says she still loves him
They were joined by their fates
But she can’t love him
For it’s he she most hates

April O April
Please hear me plead
April O April
His love you don’t need!

April O April
I feel your pain
April O April
Stop playing his game!

April O April
Why do you stay?
April O April
Hurry! Get away!

April O April
You need to be freed
April O April
Of my love, you can feed!

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Love is the law, love under will.

© Copyright 2000 Jeremy Locke Culberth - All Rights Reserved
Nicki
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 14

1 posted 2000-09-14 03:59 PM


This was a very interesting poem.  It must suck to be in your situation, I offer you support.  Dont loose your sanity over this girl.  I know its hard, but I've been where your at ~~ forbidden love~~ and it sucks when things dont go your way.  You have to give it all a chance to work out the way its destined to be.

Well written piece though I hope it all works out the way you want it to.

~~Nicki~~

jlocke
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since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
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2 posted 2000-09-14 04:15 PM


Thanks Nicki,
  It really does suck, but more for her than me.  She spends too much time in the emergency room.

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