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Where the Angels Dance
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Where the Angels Dance |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Through the tears I saw you there The heart of an angel shining through You took a moment to show you care As I found comfort in the love of you ~*~ Past the crystal droplets I felt you near With the arms of strength to hold me tight With a firm grip you calmed my fear Held in your embrace till morning light ~*~ Around the liquid healing I hear you call Soothing voice drawing me out Keeping me dry as the tears slowly fall Giving me your voice with which to shout ~*~ Beyond the cleansing fall I sense your stroke Removing the tears from my eyes Planting a kiss upon wings long since broke You lovingly placed a rainbow in my skies ~*~ Replacing tears for stars in the ebony sky You repainted all the scenes for me Upon these wings I shall once again fly Back to where the angels dance wild and free ~*~ **Everyone needs an angel or two** **Many thanks to mine** |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Holly...you have written my heart dear one...this could be my angel...do you mind if I send it to him? |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Paula* Of course I don't mind...I'm so very glad you have an angel...I'm sure he feels the same about you~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Butterflies.... Oh, this is gorgeous!! What a beautiful poem you wrote here.....and the angel along with it is perfect!!  < !signature-->Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-14-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Holly my friend.....you know how much this means to me and to have heard it from your voice meant more than I could ever say. Through Your Eyes Through your eyes... I see much The depth of your soul The secrets of your heart Through your eyes... I feel all The warmth of your touch The gentleness of your kiss Through your eyes... I have love Sharing our breath Merging our hearts Through your eyes... I tell all My life given over To my trust in you Through your eyes... I offer this The respect as one The truth in love Through your eyes... I give to you The passage to me Through my eyes Mark Bohannan Thank you my angel!!!!!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Well, for goodness sakes ! If this isn't the sweetest little thing ! Replacing tears for stars in the ebony sky You repainted all the scenes for me Upon these wings I shall once again fly Back to where the angels dance wild and free' '**Everyone needs an angel or two**' Me too !  Me too ! My goodness ... all this wonderful love stuff flitting around on ~butterfly wings~ and it isn't even spring ! Spring in your heart is what counts ! **Hugs** ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
~*~ Replacing tears for stars in the ebony sky You repainted all the scenes for me Upon these wings I shall once again fly Back to where the angels dance wild and free Wow beautiful and delicate thoughts... so serene, you have a wonderful angel, and a wonderful gift, excellent poem. This is the hour when the mysteries emerge A strangeness so hard to reflect A moment so moving goes straight to your heart" JOy divison |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Bdc - Terrific imagery and sense of flow. I love the theme you carry throughout so consistently. It is obvious you worked hard on this poem to make it work so well. Great writing! |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
ButterfiesDC, I had read your lovely poem and copied the lines below to illustrate what I loved about your poem...... < Then I read the reply above me pointing out the same hope filled lines. I am glad that I was not the only one to pick out the wonderful message of hope here. Bravo ! TLS |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Butterflies--love is such powerful glue...and your wings are looking beautiful! Wonderful, and very hope-filled poem!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Butterfies dc what a truly glorious poem. Angels are all around, rather like love, but we really need to see them for them to appear. Thanks for giving me a glimpse of yours, take care.  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is really lovely. Deb |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
mmmmmmmmmmm....This is beautiful and romantic and lovely and ...... I could just go on and on and on because I liked this one very much... Enlighten us with your work my dear... -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sunny* Thank you so much for reading...this is one of my favorite butterflies too Mark* Your words touch my heart and leave their prints deeply...thank you my dear sweet angel winged friend~ Marge* Spring blooms all year long...if you take the time to look Thank you so much for your wonderful comments~Brian* Thank you my friend...Your comments always mean the world to me~ LngJhnAg* It's an honor to hear from you...thank you so very much~ TLS* Each reply means so much to me and for you to share YOUR thoughts is very special...thank you so much~ Martie* I guess it takes just the right inspiration to write from the happy side of clouds....so very glad you enjoyed it~ Marsha* You are sooooo very welcome...it was my pleasure to share the view. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts~ Deb* Thank you so much, I appreciate it~ N* You are much to kind...thank you from the bottom of my heart for your comments~ [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 09-14-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Absolutely Gorgeous!!! this one took my breath away, Holly...glory of the angels...and you wrote this beautifully. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
beautiful and so radiantly written, I believe we do have Angels watching over us,though the heavens be afar we are always near to them . |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
S'en* I'm glad I could send you a beautiful thought...thank you sweetie! RB* Thank you from the bottom of my heart for reading and replying....I appreciate it~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I'm batting 1000 - reading just the kind of poems to make me smile - so far this ome made me smile the broadest tonight - thank you |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent. . . it's good for all of us to have angels isn't it?? Well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved this one. Very beautiful. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a kiss from fate ... a dance with destiny ... on wings of a dove...by the gifts of an angels love somethings are simply just meant to be. and in the arms of an angel ... Butterfly finally flys free. ******** this is by far the most beautiful poem youve ever written... its exquisite and enchanting its exceptional ... but then so is the poet... and her inspiration. love you me There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
WOW! This is breathtakingly beautiful my sweet friend! My humble words could never do it justice. Certainly these words were penned by an Angel, the stars shine brightly for you my friend! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This is a very beautiful poem! I enjoyed it alot...~ ~Cherie~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I was so taken by this that I forgot to add to my library and that could never be....hugging you my friend. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Butterflies~ When a poem is so abundant with great azure beauty, no words can suffice in the praise of your talent... Thanks for sharing this magnificent poetry... regards, sudhir |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
~WOW~. Got to love those angels. Now those butterfly wings help you fly among 'em, right? Awesome, awesome work. Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!!! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
So true, beauifully put. There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
WY* I'm so glad that your swing was kept alive...thank you so much~ Sven* Yes it is...especially those that pull us from the darkness. Thank you~ Victoria* Thank you so much for reading~ Janet* Kisses and hugs to you my dear friend..your wings look lovely tonight  thank you for flying over the bars to reply..you know how much it means to me~Eagle* An Aussie in wings I see...thank you my dear friend~ Beth* Your kind words touch my heart...thank you so much~ Mark* Such a forgetful Angel Sudhir* You are always much to kind to me...thank you my dear friend..with tears of thanks in my eyes~ Cuddlez* Well butterfly wings aren't as strong as Angels but I'm working on it...thank you so much~ Vandana* I've so very glad, thank you~ Maria* Thank you from the bottom of my heart~ Passions is proof that their are Angels among us....thank you for flying here tonight~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Awesome! Well put together!!! <*\\\>< Be an organ donor...give your heart to Jesus! |
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