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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Listen to the music as it plays within your heart, a resonance of gladness, in which words have no part. Follow on the music, as it leads you in the dance of life and lust and hope and grace and above all romance. Listen to the music as it ebbs and swells again, rising to crescendo within the lives of men. Follow on the music, to find the greater plan as you swirl and dip and prance and glide and all with fine elan. Listen to the music as it sings within your head to give you dreams of tenderness while you're within your bed. Follow on the music, as it comfort whispers soft while you shake and move and change the world, with dreams held high aloft. Listen to the music as the tarnished world fades and within your life you hear rousing accolades Follow on the music through streams and boughs and glades And take with you a song of hope into the world of shades. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Such a wonderful poem this one with a clear ringing message.... I LOVE MUSIC... I LOVE MUSIC... I DO ... regards O Kethry, sudhir. P.S. somehow, I am tempted to listen to the song "Music is my first love... and it will be my last"...  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sudhir, thank you so much for your kind words. I also love music. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Mona Lisa Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 100Halifax, Nova Scotia |
Wow, this is great. I eat, sleep, drink and breathe music so I especially enjoyed this. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Oh, the lovely music floats through the fresh dawning of this day. *But ... but ... the poet just HAS to put words to his music ! Or music to his words ! Thanks for sharing, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Really lovely work Kethry a pleasure to read. K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Beautifully done Kethry. If I close my eyes I can almost hear music, oh sorry that's not music, it's the kids stereo. Dee |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mona Lisa, thank you for your reply. Glad you enjoyed the song. Marge-I think both, but sometimes the words are all in your head and you make them up to the music as you go along. Sometimes the words make their own music. I think that's what poetry is. Severn thank for the kind response. Dee, don't worry about the stereo, the music plays despite the distraction of reality. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful theme to this poem. When you follow your heart, it is like music telling you which dance to do Very well written Liz |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Kethry - When I listen to the music, why do I imagine you in the video??? And why is the video kept out of reach of minors??? *veg* Great theme, and the flow was pretty smooth too! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Kethry.... Ahhhhh....you greatly satisfied this musician's heart with this lovely poem!! I thank you!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Liz, thank you for your kind comments and for hearing the song. LJA it's because you are warped and twisted and there is no hope of redemption for you. Also because I'm getting under your skin.  Sunny1 so glad you stopped by to listen. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kethry--Love the flow of this peace, it almost sings itself...and life is full of music and music full of life...what wonderful thoughts you have!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
What a joyous musical feast. I Love This Poem it sings to me. Beautifully sung Kethry, I can hear this as clear as a bell.  |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Really liked this poem, reminded me of why I love music so much and what it gives me in return.... -nando- |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Martie, thank you for your kind words. I believe life is a song, sometimes it's an anthem sometimes it's a dirge but always AMAZING! Marsha, thank you for stopping by and listening. I hope it made your feet dance a little. Nando, thanks for hearing the music. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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