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Land Of Dreams |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
You visit in my land of dreams. Beauty like none I've ever seen. Drifting on clouds of indigo blue. Your vision now coming into view. Gather the sun, the moon, the stars. Keeping in mind how special you are. Dreams lying scattered amongst the meadows, Like the soft petals blown from a gentle rose. So let the music start to play. Dream weaver, come, take me away. The evening skies are turning red. Two hearts, two souls are now blended. Beating heart I feel you race, Each time I feel his warm embrace. The sapphires that sparkle in the night Have touched this heart with pure delight. Floating now on golden wings. Happy tunes my heart now sings, As I listened to the midnight serenade. Then, with the morning sun, the night scenes fade. |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Okay, so I'm reading this poem right...and I'm also reading another book at the same time. And in this book there's a place called Tel'aran'rhiod. It is a dreamworld in which special people can enter. These special people are called dreamwalkers and they're born with the ability to enter this place. Anyways, in this place you can invision anything, whether clothing, places, nightmares, whatever, and it will appear if you concentrate hard enough. So, yeah, I was thinking about how cool it would be if I were able to go there and what I would do. I think I would envision myself in DC to visit my girlfriend (she's going to school there) or maybe I'd jet on over to a really tall mountain to catch a gorgeous sunset. And I would always have on expensive clothing, and everyone would think I was some sort of lord or something. That would be fun. Yeah, sorry, I rambled. Your little nice exciting intriguing little poem made me think about that. that's all |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
No need to apologize MI, I'm glad you were intrigued.  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very Lovely piece here. Loved the thoughts it brings to mind. Flow is exceptional. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very dreamy Eloise..James |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I concur with Mark. I like the thoughts, and the flow indicates you worked on this poem before you posted it. This is a worthy trait,one which I need, since I sometimes work on my poems AFTER I post them - lol. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Mark. Appreciate you stopping by and reading. James, thanks. I've been in a "dreamy state" lately. LngJhnAg, thank you so much. I try to get the tweaks out first, but it doesn't always work. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi ELOISE, I'm sighing Lady Poet... The visions placed here in rhyme... Swept me to a faraway land... Lovely expression and I thank you for a splendid night time read. Coco |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Coco for such kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved it. Very beautiful.. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you for stopping by Victoria and for commenting. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Eloise! Denise |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
And as always, thank you Denise. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ You've set this mind to dreaming. These are such lovely thoughts you've laid before me. 'Drifting on clouds of indigo blue.' How pretty I find that thought. Thanks for sharing your pen of dreams. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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