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With Naked Abandon - For Martie

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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores


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With Naked Abandon
~*Marge Tindal*~

When happy escapes
and runs halfway across the beaches,
searching with naked abandon for newly-found joy,
I shed the encumbrance of bikini-clad shadows
and chase long forgotten folly.
Waves of memory knock me down,
ebbing and flowing me with the tides.
I ride - I ride
Crested shorelines, with castles still standing,
call me back to sunburned shores of yesterday's magic
I run barefoot and naked in the moistened sand,
collapsing on beach blankets, indigo passion unraveling.
Grinning up at the September sky,
we both exhale our youth.
Ahhhh !


*Yeah, I really did !
  




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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The Shores of Alone


1 posted 09-13-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Marge, this is glorious, this is just what I am planning to do next month..Lovely writing.
catalinamoon
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2 posted 09-13-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

I was planning for a giggle but I found
instead a very content **sigh** beautiful
work Marge...we should all have moments like
this in the sand~ A gift of the heart to
Martie, you don't need me to say she'll love
it  
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3 posted 09-13-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Oh, the images this one brings to mind...
Martie
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4 posted 09-14-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Marge--the moon is full, the pool is warm, I'm gonna get nakked and I won't even burn.  You are just so wonderfully fun!

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 09-14-2000).]
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I'm with your 'deer - mind flooded with images
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OMG!
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CatalinaMoon~
Next month ?  
Enjoy and remember that you don't
have to pack when you go nekkid !

ButterfliesDC~
That Martie just conjures up some great inspiration !

Balladeer~
Turn that projector off !
You've seen it a hundred times already !
Thanks, love.

Martie~
See what ya' done ! !
I thank you and I imagine Taylor is grinning big time !

Wilfred~
You been watching 'deer's reruns ?  

Mike~
You say so much
when you say so little.
Thanks, guy !
~*Marge*~




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REMARKABLE!

regards,
sudhir
Alan
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Very nice. I liked the poem but I like the thoughts it gave to me even more. Keep up the wonderful work.
Alan
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Just gotta love this one Marge....I'm leaving the meadow now to head for the beach!!!  Bonnie
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11 posted 09-14-2000 08:01 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hey Marge(y) - this is great work my friend!

Love that last line...I really do.

I want to go to a beach right now!! LOL.

K

"He looked across the
silky surface of the Severn...
it was a famously difficult
river with fierce tides..."


From Jack Maggs

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Marge
Amazing!

What a Kodak moment! Photogenic in every way.

Kethry.


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-
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Wonderfully written fun poem
Your writing has a magic to it
Martie will love this one
Liz
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Beautiful superb breathtaking ...... and the poem weren't bad either. ....such a wonderful heart you have and the imagery....wellll let's just say that I am glad to have the ORIGINAL video of this one..lol....

hugs to you and our mutual friend.
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Marge,
All your writings are a delight. *L* Sy
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Marge, don't mind these guys... you know men are soooo visual! This is a wonderful sharing of exhuberance and abandon, and I want to come with you all!  

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

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wonderfully done, so many great images.....enjoyed your fun marge....*S*

Greeneyes
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Hey Marge....

After a long vacation with alot of traveling and new experiences I`m back here in the garden of passion...Don`t know if you remember me, but I sure remember your poetry and how much I enjoy reading it. So here`s to you from a big admiror, keep it up...

-nando-


Ask me how to live your life, and this to you IŽll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, youŽll smile at yesterday...
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You are just too good Marge! You can make a person smile remembering the good ole days!

Deb  
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Sudhir~
Thanks.
That cute Martie just HAD to ask me if I frolic nekkid
in the ocean ... and this one ran memories on it's own.

Alan~
Thank you for visiting my beach.

Bonnie~
Thank you.  Come on down ! Water's fine !

Kamla~
Glad that you liked it.
Hmmmm !  This beach is getting crowded !

Kethry~
Here I thought it was the stars twinkling -
Could have been flashbulbs ! ! Oh, my !

Elizabeth~
The beach WAS fun !
Beach blanket magic !  Wahoo !  

MarkB~
Better keep the original ...
could turn out to be a classic !  

Seymour~
You'd be welcomed on my beach anytime, love.

Claire~
Oh ... I LOVE these visual guys !
Come on - romp with abandon !

GreenEyes~
Thank you - so did I !

Nando~
Of course I remember you !
Glad to have you back with us.
Got a blanket ?  Come on and join the romp !

BloomingRose~
Tee-Hee !
Those good ole days were just last week ! LOL !  
What fun to write new memories.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge~
I KNOW I used to be a mermaid in a past life....for when I swim, I NEED to do it in the buff, there's something so sensual about water sliding over my bare skin....and uhm I ramble

Gorgeous poetry dear
~Heather
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Heather~
ONLY way to flip your fins !  

Past life ?  I believe !  I believe !
Come on down to Florida and lets hit the beaches
and frolic with other mermaids!  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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This is delightful Marge.  
Marge Tindal
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Eloise~
I am always pleased to see that you have read my poetry.
Thank you for always being there.
~*Marge*~


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