»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #9
»
With Naked Abandon - For Martie
| Open Poetry #9 |
|
With Naked Abandon - For Martie |
|
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
|
With Naked Abandon ~*Marge Tindal*~ When happy escapes and runs halfway across the beaches, searching with naked abandon for newly-found joy, I shed the encumbrance of bikini-clad shadows and chase long forgotten folly. Waves of memory knock me down, ebbing and flowing me with the tides. I ride - I ride Crested shorelines, with castles still standing, call me back to sunburned shores of yesterday's magic I run barefoot and naked in the moistened sand, collapsing on beach blankets, indigo passion unraveling. Grinning up at the September sky, we both exhale our youth. Ahhhh ! *Yeah, I really did ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Marge, this is glorious, this is just what I am planning to do next month..Lovely writing. catalinamoon |
||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I was planning for a giggle but I found instead a very content **sigh** beautiful work Marge...we should all have moments like this in the sand~ A gift of the heart to Martie, you don't need me to say she'll love it  |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, the images this one brings to mind...  |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--the moon is full, the pool is warm, I'm gonna get nakked and I won't even burn. You are just so wonderfully fun! [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 09-14-2000).] |
||
|
Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I'm with your 'deer - mind flooded with images |
||
|
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
OMG! |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Next month ? Enjoy and remember that you don't have to pack when you go nekkid ! ButterfliesDC~ That Martie just conjures up some great inspiration ! Balladeer~ Turn that projector off ! You've seen it a hundred times already ! Thanks, love. Martie~ See what ya' done ! ! I thank you and I imagine Taylor is grinning big time !  Wilfred~ You been watching 'deer's reruns ?  Mike~ You say so much when you say so little. Thanks, guy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
REMARKABLE! regards, sudhir |
||
|
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Very nice. I liked the poem but I like the thoughts it gave to me even more. Keep up the wonderful work. Alan |
||
|
BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Just gotta love this one Marge....I'm leaving the meadow now to head for the beach!!! Bonnie |
||
|
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey Marge(y) - this is great work my friend! Love that last line...I really do. I want to go to a beach right now!! LOL. K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
||
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge Amazing! What a Kodak moment! Photogenic in every way. Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderfully written fun poem Your writing has a magic to it Martie will love this one Liz |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful superb breathtaking ...... and the poem weren't bad either.  ....such a wonderful heart you have and the imagery....wellll let's just say that I am glad to have the ORIGINAL video of this one..lol.... hugs to you and our mutual friend. |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, All your writings are a delight. *L* Sy |
||
|
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, don't mind these guys... you know men are soooo visual! This is a wonderful sharing of exhuberance and abandon, and I want to come with you all! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
||
Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wonderfully done, so many great images.....enjoyed your fun marge....*S* Greeneyes |
||
|
nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Hey Marge.... After a long vacation with alot of traveling and new experiences I`m back here in the garden of passion...Don`t know if you remember me, but I sure remember your poetry and how much I enjoy reading it. So here`s to you from a big admiror, keep it up... -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
||
|
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
You are just too good Marge! You can make a person smile remembering the good ole days! Deb |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Thanks. That cute Martie just HAD to ask me if I frolic nekkid in the ocean ... and this one ran memories on it's own. Alan~ Thank you for visiting my beach. Bonnie~ Thank you. Come on down ! Water's fine ! Kamla~ Glad that you liked it. Hmmmm ! This beach is getting crowded ! Kethry~ Here I thought it was the stars twinkling - Could have been flashbulbs ! ! Oh, my ! Elizabeth~ The beach WAS fun ! Beach blanket magic ! Wahoo ! MarkB~ Better keep the original ... could turn out to be a classic ! Seymour~ You'd be welcomed on my beach anytime, love. Claire~ Oh ... I LOVE these visual guys ! Come on - romp with abandon ! GreenEyes~ Thank you - so did I ! Nando~ Of course I remember you ! Glad to have you back with us. Got a blanket ? Come on and join the romp ! BloomingRose~ Tee-Hee ! Those good ole days were just last week ! LOL ! What fun to write new memories. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Marge~ I KNOW I used to be a mermaid in a past life....for when I swim, I NEED to do it in the buff, there's something so sensual about water sliding over my bare skin....and uhm I ramble Gorgeous poetry dear ~Heather |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Heather~ ONLY way to flip your fins ! Past life ? I believe ! I believe ! Come on down to Florida and lets hit the beaches and frolic with other mermaids! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is delightful Marge.  |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ I am always pleased to see that you have read my poetry. Thank you for always being there. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely beach images, and I get the message, you be naked! *S* Corinne |
||
|
X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
OK Marge I'll come swimming with ya, but if I get a sunburn anywhere delicate yer in big trubble missy. (hmmm 'twould be a nice way to get back in touch with my mermaidian roots...these derned lakes around here are freezzing! Oh and we could drown sailors while we're at it, sort of mermaid in training type thingy) *sly grin* ~H |
||
|
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
What a hoot Marge A delightful poem...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 in recall~~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dang! My pool is in disrepair and too cold for my naked pair of....oops! Love you, Sis!  |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Hmmm ... guess that why I'm LOVING this hot tub/spa !!! And soon, soon .... it will be a neekkid romp at the beaches !!! Yah ha hooie O !  *HUGLETS* ~*Me ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
