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Unfinished Thought

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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


0 posted 09-13-2000 10:00 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes


She holds the mysteries of her life,
    some trapped like a river,
    that holds her soul of untouched dreams

    Untouched in the roots of the air  that flow
    the earth, lit with fire, unbearable sometimes
    unforgiving, taunting her mind

    The stars of last night,
    the winds of last night
    woke her in early morning

    in early morning

    Her words were faint,
    she mumbles to memories
    long ago memories,

    The last time you said
    the world spun, I put my hands out
    to try and capture,

    to try and capture the

    impossible

    something inside
    something tells me

    sometimes

    time passes, to
    time standing still, and

    still standing

    wonders what holds
    her life together
    what holds her together

    what is together?
    does it mean life?

    what means life?

    wonders why the
    winds can change construction,
    why do they always change?, always construct?
    sometimes, all the time, maybe just

    (like)

    different trees, different limbs,
    different roots, different branches,

    reaching out, reaching above


    her head, she breaths in the shadows,
    breaths in the mysteries, breaths in her mind,
    lets it run beneath, lets it run through,
    lets it run over

    her soul like water,
    in unfinished thought
© Copyright 2000 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-13-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

this, I like...thank you!
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


2 posted 09-14-2000 08:40 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

WOW....I am glad that I got to catch up with this one.  Very nice formatting and the flow was superb.  Show us some more please.
Effigy
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Grrrrreat!!  I really enjoyed this one.  Well written.
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4 posted 09-14-2000 07:51 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Sunshine  I really appreciate you taking time to read my words.....*S*


Mark   The replies you give, make writing worth while, thank you...*S*


Effigy  I am so glad you enjoyed....thank you
for reading...*S*


Greeneyes~

  


Your aroma still lingers
when I stand there,
still on soft ground,
still lingers as the ocean mist
spreads you over me
I find peace ~LC~ 99
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