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I Know You Too Well
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I Know You Too Well |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
In years, I have been knowing you so well, You never tell When time needs a friend like you, It's nothing , You don't know me, You wouldn't believe single word I say to you, Time has been change, Since you have left me behind, you didn't want to Hear the things We used to say before, It's so good to have you, Again,back In life, Did you notiething I have change, But you were just standing there It seems like yesterday, Your eyes shown me, How much the truth and lies In your eyes, You have been lying Through out the year, You didn't want me to know, You found another love, And you came back to tell me, That you don't want me anymore, I was wrong everytime, Evertime, I touch you, You made me know, That you were never meant for me, Now , I know you too well, Yes, I know you too well, You never tell, How much you can tell, You never know, How much you can tell, I know you too well, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very powerful and evocative... a touch sad... but excellently written... great work, vandana, Regards, Sudhir |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice poem Vandana... I liked it a lot. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Hi Vandana, Touching poem...and very nicely written. Going to look for one to cheer me up now  Take care, Linda Munday. p.s. What a rollercoaster this place can be!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed this touching piece Vandana..."I know you too well"...boy that say's it all. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 09-13-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Well done vandana. . . Just when they think that we don't know them. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Yup, sounds like you made a great-hurtful- discovery. Hope you are recovering from the wounds. Man, and then in a week or 2 they might confuse you all over again. I DONT UNDERSTAND PEOPLE  ). (Yelling that in a um, nice, way of course...)Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetVanDana~ *Hugs* my friend. You will come to know one who is worthy of your trust and your love. *HONEST* ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
vandana... Sometimes the ones that we think we know the best, are the ones we don't know at all. You wrote very well on this subject! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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