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The Couple
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The Couple |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia 
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The Couple I hear laughter just outside my window curiosity has gotten the best of me I rise from my chair to look down below what a wondrous thing I did see. The couple were walking hand in hand eating a double dipped ice cream they were dancing to their own band Lost in a world of their own dream. Stealing kisses as they crossed the street There eyes shown with admiration A love like that I thought was sweet A love so true filled with affection. As they strolled along their merry way I knew this story must be told I hope with all my heart that’s us someday To be that romantic when we are old. 9-13-00 -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Kitty *perk, did somebody say "kitties?"* I like the way you led me along with a picture of two young sweethearts, and then changed the whole scene with your last line. This is a wonderful example of great discipline and forethought. Very nicely done! |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thank-you for your reply. I so much admire the elderly who have shared so much of their lives together. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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