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for you...with a blush on the side |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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traces---in a touch of dark, linger light's imprint. graces---three, a glint of spark, of chalice kissing chalice brim. a flash of free, through depths of me... --enfolded-- see, ye, now my wings? Hear my moan, of thing newborn, bird that waits for cue to sing... and I have flown the skies of free, tasted moons of mighty mead... I have done all done can do, I pray you see the best in me. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 09-13-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
MY GOODNESS!!! What expression... regards O Serene One, Sudhir |
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Jaysun C Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 56 |
it seams that you are singing now, and it is beautifull to hear you |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
THIS one is too perfect, too cool for words. so is the poet  click-into my library you go  *smile* my sister is the poet I am but a shadow. by the light of poetry I read then dream |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, serenity... I like it all... I love the closing couplet.. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was well written. How can he not see the best in you. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
wow, Serenity - you wrote this so very well. I love the complexity in the lines - each line so simple, but taken as a whole, a true symphony. The composition deserves that you blush... Applause! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
well, this was wonderful! The only reason you should blush is because of the high praise this poem is receiving.  ~Heather |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
S'en* This is fantastic...but a blush...ohhhhh NO Flush...yes..lol The way you wrapped it up was poetry perfection...seeing through the heart...we can hope can't we!! ((hugs)) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'd like to blushingly thank everyone for reading....will be back later to read and catch up on my replies...Much gratitude, as always... |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
hi serenity ... this is quite mesmerizing ... you always seem to re-invent your style ... i liked this very much |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I liked this....nice writing....  Julie :) |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
*wolf-whistle* This is beautiful! You have such signature styling and your images are crystal clear. Just a great poem! Trev. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi SERENITY, Enjoyed this poem... Coco |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOOHOO!! Love those opening lines! Just suck ya right in! And blush you should, this is some mighty fantasic work here girl! BRAVO BRAVO!! <*\\\>< Be an organ donor...give your heart to Jesus! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--Oh how I loved this poem...you are singing and flying all over this room...big smiles. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mark, Juli, Coco, Martie and Dovie---thanks for the smiles of your replies...made me feel warm and fuzzy all over. Oh. I am warm and fuzzy all over. Nevermind. Many Grins, and thanks to all me buddies. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Serenity, Melting moments.... Very nice... mmmm Warm and fuzzy and beautifully written. Take care, Linda Munday. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleBlushingSerenity~ This is WONDERFUL ! Love you, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Very interesting. I liked the poem and your style. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I DO!!!! I DO!!!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
S, this is FANTASTIC. Incredible flow and style. Catalinamoon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Trew--how could I forget you? Thank you so much...a wolf whistle yet... Linda--have been a fan of yours from the beginning...I thank you also. Mom....me luvs ya and hugs ya back! Alan...thanks for the reply, and welcome to the forum...will be looking forward to reading more of your work. catalina..."flow" is nice...I like to hear that...with a wink and a nod to-- Balladeer...I had to go back and read my own poem to figure out just what in the sam heck it is that you "do"---LOL--don't startle me like that! With much appreciation and hugs to me friend! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
this I like... a lot... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I believe I am seeing part of the best in you now and I love what I see. Wonderful write from you.....please share more of serenity's soul with us.....tender, soft, and full of promise in this one. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Serenity - this is sooooo good - fired up my lapsed muse - thank you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yeah...nicely written and delivered...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mike-----five words, and oh the effect they have on me, you poet, you! I hug you to my wee little heart! Mark-----angelheart--Sweet you! Hugs for the warden...LOL...love ya much for all that you do. Wilfred--if your muse gets any more fired up, methinks she will spontaneously combust!!!But I thank you, my most generous new-found poet pal! James----you never fail to warm my heart. Thank you! I'm lapping up praise like a puppy here, and not ashamed to admit it--grinning like mad-- Thanks to all! (Gawd, I love this place...) |
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