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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2000-09-13 12:06 PM


Somehow I feel trapped
in this looking glass
my face seems right up close
and jaded with a new cut line
thats forever fading
Caught up in this looking glass
looking back at me
How did I forget to save
my memories most precious to me
Memories have faded away
what happened then
and now
I can't remember anything
just looking at this face
that somehow resembles me.

© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-14 12:51 PM


When you most need them they will be there.....sometimes they just need to go on vacation too.....they are after all....only memories and they get tired too.

Beautiful write and I have no idea how this one made it to page four like this.....jjjjeeeeezzzzzzzz take 2 days off and look what happens.lol

SO glad I caught up with it.

Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2000-09-14 05:13 PM


thank you Mark, your soooooo kind........ I believe I can answer your question I do my deepest thinking shall we say after midnight! When all the world is sleeping I am writing, sometimes I look back and forget about things I have wrote about so that's how this happens but as long as it's there I can remember that it wasn't just a dream! LOOKING THROUGH THE LOOKING GLASS! thanks for being such a great friend
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-09-15 12:10 PM


RoseBud~
I love reflecting, so this one got me.
Enjoyed it, hon.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2000-09-15 12:23 PM


Marge thanks so much! Sometimes it's good to look but we must take the time to see the reflections in order for them to be remembered.
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