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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


0 posted 09-12-2000 06:47 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes

    A fire burns
    as lovers sleep
    during spring rain
    beneath the earth

    In the seas of night
    songs voice through
    silence, in strides
    along the edges of darkness
    that speak softly

    My lips dry your tears,
    as they speak your soft
    words, to a heart
    that walks through you
    when you are alone

    Bare your thirst,
    drink of the waters
    in passion weeping
    your shadows in arms
    of tired eyes ready to shut

    Of a heart you sleep
    in constant dreams deeper
    to a journey yet taken

    Beside you I lay , in tributes
    of the present, hanging your
    portrait stretched upon
    the earth as my canvas (as)

    I wear your m a s k of life,

    Together Close
    We sleep
© Copyright 2000 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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Greeneyes,
What tenderness spoken here...a comfort, a release, an almost intoxicating calm. I enjoyed this so much.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

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your words are - as they always have been - so meaningful, tender and loving, I'm always moved. find your peace - you will ~S~
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this was beautiful....

~Heather
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Thank you all, for the kindness your words show.....*S*

Greeneyes~



Your aroma still lingers
when I stand there,
still on soft ground,
still lingers as the ocean mist
spreads you over me
I find peace ~LC~ 99
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The Shores of Alone


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How beautiful, especially the last stanza. Just perfect.
catalinamoon
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Florida's Foreverly Shores


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GreenEyes~
Quite, quite lovely and serene.
~*Marge*~


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Superb. . . a quiet picture of a gentle love. . .

Excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Marge~ serene I love that word, thank you for responding so kindly....

Sven~  gentle love is sometimes hard to find, I am glad you enjoyed this.... thank you  

GE~




Your aroma still lingers
when I stand there,
still on soft ground,
still lingers as the ocean mist
spreads you over me
I find peace ~LC~ 99
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wonderful words tender thoughts  

The softest thing in the world Will overcome the hardest.Non-being can enter where there is no space". Taoist saying

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