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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-09-12 05:04 AM



Sing for me........
I sing for you.......

Laugh for me........
I laugh with you.......

Dream for me........
I dream with you......

Wish for me....
I wish for us.......

I and you......
Love we do........

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with you
1 posted 2000-09-12 09:04 AM


EP2~ short and sweet.....I like this very much!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-09-12 09:14 AM


I believe that you have just re-defined those three little words and changed them from "I love you" to "I love US"....beautiful sentiments in so few words.  Lovely write.
Paula Finn
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missouri
3 posted 2000-09-12 02:54 PM


I adore the simplicity of this...very tender
Nicki
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4 posted 2000-09-12 07:18 PM


I really liked this poem, it was so simple and sweet, really well written.  You have captured the essence of love in a few lines. Well done
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