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Open Poetry #9
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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-09-12 01:22 AM



My Heart I gave.....
You gave it back with yours attached....

My dreams I shared........
New dreams we made.........

My wish I made........
It came true with you..........

My love I pledged.......
You said I do..........

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-09-12 01:34 AM


EP2~ this is so romantic!   It made me smile   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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2 posted 2000-09-12 01:39 AM


eyesplus2.
This is a lovely poem. Well done.

Be well
Kethry.


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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