Open Poetry #9 |
Make Me Your Song...........(by Sunny1 and Bill Charles) |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Welcome to our song, where all hearts can join in and together we will play a symphony of love...... [Written together for you, by Sunny1 and Bill Charles] [She] You play upon my heart, like the strumming of a sweet guitar… My ears hear the sound of your gentle voice… And I know I will never tire of listening… [He] Your heart did I steal, with my soft guitar melody… Listen to what your ears perceive, the soft whispers from my gentle voice… [She] You touch my heart, and it starts to sing your praises… You’ve struck its chord, and it responds in harmony… A song of love takes form within my soul… [He] A heart of tenderness does it sing, all love praises from me… Chords I have strummed, a melody you with I, Souls mesh, love forms, in pleasant harmony… [She] Make me your song and take my notes of love to you… Play me into your life’s own sweet melody… Listen to the joy as our two hearts sing… Make me your song… [He] The song that I play, love notes to you, strumming a melody, two lives, one, Hearts sing, and joy is ecstasy, as you become my song… We thank you for singing along! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
YES OH YES!!!!!!!! glady will I sing with you...beautiful |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Paula.... I can hear your beautiful voice and the harmonies sound so sweet!!!!! Thank you, twin!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, Thanks for working together to put this one to paper. I love it, and have to say that you are just one great talent. Thanks Sunny, let's try another. Bill |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sunny I can hear the melody coming through the computer now. Sounds great. What are you two going to try next - hmmmmmmmmmmmm! didi |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Bill..... This poem would be nothing without the beauty of BOTH parts, and you made that happen, my friend!! Yes, let's do try more...I'm ready! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi didi.... It's good to see you here.....I'm not sure what's next, but it will be fun!! Thank you!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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