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The Last Falling Leaf
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The Last Falling Leaf |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Watching the leaves fall past my window I remember you Like a breathe of autumn wind your memory creeps in again And all my hard won indifference flutters like a leaf to the ground I cannot seem to lose you in this cold autumn wind Leaving me lonely, leaving me chilled, And I long for the warmth of the summer sun |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ What a glow ! Of course I'm sitting here with the air conditioner going ... so it's a little difficult to visualize the cool winter ... but I'm trying ! LOL !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Lady Marge...as always your words are so very welcome...winter? brrrrr no way...I like it HOT hehehe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I love the Autumn and watching the leaves fall from the trees. This is a a wonderful poem you have penned and though it has sadness in it..memories are all so sweet. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula.... This is my favorite time of year, although a lot of memories are left behind, like warm days, warm nights and someone to share them with. Beautiful poem!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Well done, Paula... very well done... "all my hard won indifference flutters like a leaf to the ground" wonderful... regards, sudhir |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Paula, This is so very pretty...I love the fall and how it so often does bring memories long forgotten to mind. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Hi Paula ... this is an interesting piece ... seems you're both happy and sad ... Like a breathe of autumn wind your memory creeps in again nice ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I tend to be cold-blooded...or is that warm-blooded? I am cold most of the time so I really felt this one...and moving on will come, eventually. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...yes I know how you love nature..thanks Sunny girl...thank hon...you know I treasure your words Sudhir...thank you kind sir for your words of praise and encouragement Michael...I am happy you thought it pretty...thanks Mark...yes happy and sad...but a good kind of sad if thats possible...just a longing for things yet to come. Passingshadows...LOL I am cold all the time too...but you know what they say...cold hands warm heart...thanks |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Paula this is so good. Fall is a time of memory. It is for me at least. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi PAULA, Incredible writing... How you have weaved the emotion and autumn season in2 one I am impressed... As always your writing is a pleasure to read  Coco |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ I love this.....(I prefer the cold crisp days and nothing makes me long for summer)  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
I really like the way you tie the emotions into the changing seasons. The cold and bite of autumn, with its symbolic falling leaves, versus the warmth and comfort of summer's content. Maybe I'm tired, but that's what it says to me! In any event, it's a fine piece and a pleasure to read. Trev. |
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Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
Your poem brings back memories of the montains back home and the memories of loved ones I left. Thanks for the trip back on memory lane!!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula~ This is so beautiful...well done The imagery just perfect Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Kitkat...it does seem like fall brings back old ghosts...put them to bed before the cold of winter sets in. Coco...thank you I appreciate your sweet words and to be able to impress you...wow. Lol SEA...give me that summer heat anytime...thanks Trev...you read it just right...and why are you so tired friend? Its always an honour to have you stop by...thank you Bustem...so happy to take you on a backward journey...sometimes its good to look back that way you can appreciate the here and now. Tracie...thank you for your sweet words |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your imagery is perfection here Paula...it fits the situation that you describe perfectly...((hugs)) The sun will come out and warm those memories I'm sure...till then I hope you find the peace you need in poetry and friends. Excellent work~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your imagery is perfection here Paula...it fits the situation that you describe perfectly...((hugs)) The sun will come out and warm those memories I'm sure...till then I hope you find the peace you need in poetry and friends. Excellent work~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your imagery is perfection here Paula...it fits the situation that you describe perfectly...((hugs)) The sun will come out and warm those memories I'm sure...till then I hope you find the peace you need in poetry and friends. Excellent work~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nicely written!!!!!!! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Paula....I found this so beautiful, with it also bringing back memories of days gone by for me, thank you....*S* Greeneyes~ Your aroma still lingers when I stand there, still on soft ground, still lingers as the ocean mist spreads you over me I find peace ~LC~ 99 |
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