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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-09-10 07:09 PM



Upon Further Reflection
~*Marge Tindal*~

Cheval of looking glass
whose image do I see
She moves aside
I step inside
within the past of me

Newborn babe of long-ago skin
wrapped this little heart within
Cradled in arms of mother dearly
father stood watching so sincerely

Toddled through this life and time
fast-forward to the land of rhyme
Teenaged loves to carry her well
into the days of sweet married dwell

Unison of two hearts
melding as one
Holding and enfolding
with God's love is begun

Woman-child with daughter-child
so sweetly and gently held
Arms budding with love
in gentle flowing swells

The scene repeated
with three sons in follow
All the more reason
to acknowledge the wallow
of mother in love with life so newborn
entrusted to the heart of motherhood adorned

Past the heart peak of letting go
little hands now hold hands of their own
Knowing and growing with things they were taught
returning again on every thought

Gathering now the silver strands
of well-loved memories
in reflected hand

The image in the mirror resembles me
Move aside and let me through
The memories are well-reflected
I've many more days of living to do


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ddgoose
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1 posted 2000-09-10 07:30 PM


Marge

The words are so sweet and tender and weave a beautiful story.

The image in the mirror resembles me
Move aside and let me through
The memories are well-reflected
I've many more days of living to do

I just love the ending - you are so right!

didi

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2 posted 2000-09-10 07:43 PM


Absolutely marvelous...
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3 posted 2000-09-10 07:55 PM


That's right! We're far from finished with creating new memories! Love it!  

Denise

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4 posted 2000-09-10 10:34 PM


Marge~

Thank you for the stroll down memory lane my friend.  It was beautiful!!  Just remember, they will always take those lessons with them to pass on to future generations.  I agree with you . . . you have many more days of living to do!!  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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5 posted 2000-09-10 11:19 PM


You KNEW I'd love this...and yep, I do try to enjoy the "be here now"  but I am also now inspired to take better care of myself, too...LOL, thanks marge.
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6 posted 2000-09-10 11:22 PM


DiDi~
I appreciate your peek at my reflection.

Karilea~
You reflect a loving spirit, my friend.

Denise~
AMEN !  Glad you enjoyed.

LoneWolf~
If I leave nothing more than the reflection
my grandmother taught me to look for each day,
I will know that others see me for who I really am.
Thank you, my friend.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-09-10 11:27 PM


MyLittleSerenity~
You are such a tender little piece of my heart.
Better care for future wear !
Good idea !
Love you and thank you for touching my life.
Now where IS that e-mail you promised earlier ?
~*Mom*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2000-09-10 11:29 PM


Beautiful, reflective thoughts Marge ... this had a lovely flow and warm feel to it.  So wonderful are the memories we garnish through life, and so fortunate that they continue to build. Very nicely penned Marg!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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9 posted 2000-09-10 11:36 PM


Fatherhood -is quite different - a transitory thing by comparison - yet motherhood lingers - in ways no man fully understands - Go mama Rose - no one will rain on your parade ~S~ - I'm sure there's a lot of life in that reflection ~S~


~Just as a sunbeam
can't separate itself from the sun
and a wave can't separate itself from the ocean;
we can't separate ourselves from one another.
We are all part of a vast sea of love
one indivisible divine mind.

                ~ Marianne Williamson ~

wilfredyeats@hotmail.com               

Martie
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10 posted 2000-09-11 01:26 AM


Marge...this is enchanting and tender...I love it!
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11 posted 2000-09-11 02:22 AM


sigh...what a wonderful backwards look into the future
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12 posted 2000-09-11 07:34 AM


Kit~
Your perceptions are right on target as usual.
Thanks for the sweet reply.

Wilfred~
The reflection of motherhood is a large piece
of the composite of ~*Marge*~ ...
it is the tender that I see in me.

Martie~
Thank you, my friend.
You know I love ya'

Paula~
Thanks for romping the midnight hour with me.
What a nice way of phrasing your take on this piece.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sudhir Iyer
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13 posted 2000-09-11 10:05 AM


Delightfully marvelous poetry....

Regards O marge,
sudhir

Mark Bohannan
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14 posted 2000-09-11 10:08 AM


The image in the mirror resembles me
Move aside and let me through
The memories are well-reflected
I've many more days of living to do


How sweet can one be?  Now move aside INDEED!!!!  Gawd woman no wonder we all love you so much.

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15 posted 2000-09-11 10:30 AM


once again beautiful... love shared unending

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16 posted 2000-09-12 11:51 PM


Sudhir~
Thank you so much my friend.

MarkB~
You are such a sweet person.
Is it any wonder we love you too ?
*Hugs*

BloomingRose~
I do appeciate your replies so much.
Thank you for the kind thoughts.

*Gosh, I just LOVE THIS PLACE ! ! !  
Can ya' tell ?
Friends ... you're the greatest !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



vlraynes
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17 posted 2000-09-13 12:08 PM



marge-
  this is lovely.  a reminder that our
  memories are not only a reflection of our
  past, but also an important part of our
  present and future.     thanks for sharing
  this.  

  love you,
      -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
                -vlraynes

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18 posted 2000-09-13 02:08 AM


Once again I am awed by your writings..I have not been able to read more of your poems due to being quite busy but I really enjoyed this one..Memory lane is so wonderful!!! Thank you!!!
Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2000-09-13 02:23 AM


Vicky~
I cherish your night-time replies.
Got the musey's, huh ?
Me too !
Thank you for the sweet reply.

Bustem~
Good to see you, my friend.
You've been missed.  Thanks for the read.
Get UN-busy !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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20 posted 2000-09-13 02:38 AM


Marge~
What a beautiful reflection this is, lovely imagery.
incredible piece....well done  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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