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Legend of the Poet |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Legend of the Poet Candlelight's golden gleam midnight's exalted dream luna's effulgent beam heartsongs then stream quilled feather's pen quoting whither, to come when dripping Cimmerian desire flaming calenture's fire song, create euphonious song seat of passion, desire belong in this, as thee shall know it, in the Legend of the Poet. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 10 September 2000 Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ I LOVED this!! The flow is perfect.  Fantastic! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ This fairly sings the poet's song ! Beautifully done, sweet poetess ! Remarkable muses alight within your inkwell. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sunshine "song, create euphonious song seat of passion, desire belong in this, as thee shall know it, in the Legend of the Poet." Beautiful - beautiful - beautiful! I really enjoyed this one. Thanks didi |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA - I liked it too! Thanks... Marge...isn't this fun???!!!...Thanks... Thank you Didi, and WELCOME to Passions!... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, Most beautiful poem!! Flows like water. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Very good. It carried me like a breeze. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LoneWolf, Temptress, thank you both for you lovely comments... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A story that will be forever told as long as there are words to tell it. . . Just wonderful my friend. . . Marge is right, you do have some amazing muses. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah, the exquisite touch of Karilea... wonderful work, my friend... regards, sudhir |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, beautiful very beautiful. "Think I'm - I'm lost among the undergrowth So much so I woke up I love you all the same" Manic street preachers You stole the sun from my heart. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
On my kness bowing before you. Superb |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gentlemen [all] - thank you very much for gracing this poem with your varied comments...I appreciate each and every one... thank you... |
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