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Moonlight Draped on the Caress of a Smile
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Moonlight Draped on the Caress of a Smile |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
His breath slow and sure Moonlight draping upon his body Caressing his skin As he lies In the depths of a dream How I long To brush his hair away From his handsome face A gentle smile upon his face Looking so peaceful I watch silently As the moon passes Upon the sweetest man I have ever laid eyes on ___________________________ ~Artistic~ Hi everyone...! I am so sorry that I have disappeared for nearly a month. I am now back in college and busy!! So please don't be surprised if I disappear for a while!  I missed being here! Hope y'all enjoy my poem! [This message has been edited by Artistic (edited 09-10-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
how about "Moonlight Draped on the Caress of a Smile" just an idea... enjoyed your poem |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Doreen- OOO! I like that title, thanks!  I appreciate it.Glad you enjoyed it... ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Artistic~ The thoughts are just LOVELY .. and Doreen's lend of a title is PERFECT ! You enjoy college and visit when you can. Always pleased to see you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Artistic, Welcome back!! This was beautiful writing. I can almost see him there myself. So tender and full of longing. Perfect. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Marge- Thank you! Glad that you understand that I'll be busy...! Lone Wolf- Thanks, I'm happy you could almost picture him within your reach. That tells me I did well. ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Artistic, simply wonderful. . . the moon shines well for you my friend. . . Excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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