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Ann
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since 2000-07-07
Posts 64
Australia

0 posted 2000-09-10 09:45 AM


The first time I  saw you
I thought nothing of it
You were just another person
In this world I had met.
Little did I know from that first day, you would
Become a good friend - important in many ways.

The days went by and still you were there
Many tears and laughter in time did we share.
Gradually you revealed some of your
Dreams and hopes while in some my lowest times it
Was you who helped me cope.
It is you who can always make me laugh when this
World gets me down and life seems too rough.

I'm so thankful for that day that you
First passed my way, and all the times since
Then you changed my dark clouds into rays
It's so often neglected to appreciate
Someone so true and so I write this poem to say Friend- thank you.


© Copyright 2000 Ann - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-09-10 10:19 AM


Ann:

Welcome to Passions!!

I love the gentle sincerity in this one. Hope to read more.


Kathleen


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-09-10 10:22 AM


This is a sweet and lovely tribute to a friend...thanks for sharing it, Ann.
Ann
Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64
Australia
3 posted 2000-09-10 10:52 AM


Thank you Irish Rose and Serenity for your kind comments i appreciate it..... God bless and smile!  
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
4 posted 2000-09-10 11:59 PM


Wonderful. Its printed and will soon be on its way to a very good friend of mine.  This is what I have been looking for!
Ann
Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64
Australia
5 posted 2000-09-11 08:10 AM


Thanks Temptress! I'm glad you liked my poem and I hope you're friend will as well...God bless you both and all the best for the future!
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-09-11 02:59 PM


A tender display of appreciation for a friend...James
Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
7 posted 2000-09-11 03:02 PM


Wonderful Writing...

WELCOME TO PASSIONS  

regards,
sudhir

Ann
Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64
Australia
8 posted 2000-09-12 07:44 AM


Thanks James for the nice comment and thanks Sudhir for welcoming me to passions for poetry. I've read both your poems and you have wonderful talent.... God bless and smile!
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
9 posted 2000-09-12 08:05 AM


Tender sincerity for a friend you have penned here.  Full of heart and it shows well.
Trew
Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada
10 posted 2000-09-12 09:58 AM


Ann,

What a wonderful piece of writing.  You must have a very special friend to deserve such a tribute!  Welcome to Passions and I hope to read more of your works soon.

Trev.

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