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Of Pebbles and Flowers (for Antonietta)
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Of Pebbles and Flowers (for Antonietta) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Of pebbles and Flowers This shrine of pebbles and flowers of shrubs cut to pretty shapes, my eyes fall upon believing you are there, as tears stream down the fleshy hill of my face a trembling voice utters words of what might have been leaving us voiceless Mum stares into Neverland and Dad cries his regrets and they fall into your earth your home I ask again Why? Why only you? Why not me? Why not both of us? then, I look at our parents and think, they needed one of us, and I guess I chose to stay Angel of Darkness 9/9/2000 |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, I'm starting to look for yours. You know this means I love your style!!! Kathleen |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
*sniff sniff* (wiping tears) DA this is so sad. One day you shall understand the reasons. Know that she watches over you all the time. Biggest Hugs my dear friend! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Mmy. My dear sweet friend...she's back haunting your heart hon? She is always there, with you. I know it. You have heard her. I am sorry for your pain, for the missing you feel of someone you never knew who should've been the closest one to you in your life. This is a beautiful tribute to her. Hold her to you hon and like Becs said you will know one day, why. Love K |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is heartrendingly beautiful, Maree. Very well written. Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sweet little DA This is so sad hon I'm sending warm HUGS your way. This is a loving tribute Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Sorrowful and heart-rendering my friend. A truly wondrous tribute.  *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow Kathleen, Thank you so very much Angel, thanks hon yes I know she is.SB, Thanks so much sweetheart Denis, thanks you much Tracie, Warm hugs recieved, Thanks hon Krista, thanks you muchly Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The searching for answers is the hardest part after the missing...you have spoken such sad and heart words with this poem...hugs! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you have asked the questions with this poem Maree. . . I hope that the answers come soon. . . Sad and beautiful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 09-09-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ This is such a tender piece. I admire you for the grace of your writing. Lovely, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Lovely Maree,,, You show such a beautiful heart Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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