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Tenderness of my Heart
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Tenderness of my Heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Tenderness of my Heart I can't make someone like me so I won't even try but if you put your arms around me I would wonder why. I can't make someone care for me when they pass along my way can only tell them how much I care for them and hope they care to stay. I can't make someone need me the way that I need you can only share the desires I feel for you and hope you need me too. I can't make someone Love me with tender feelings to impart I only know that deep within my soul these feelings grow in the tenderness of my heart. Jameslee@September08,2000 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...you have such a sweet and tender heart my friend...any woman who could pass you by needs HER head examined |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula you are so sweet...perhaps her heart examined...ha..ha..thank you...James |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
ahhh tis a sweet sentiment indeed  ~Heather |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, never lose who you are. . . never change. . . stay the same. . . she'll find you. . . when you least expect it. . . Excellent writing my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Heather and Sven for the nice comments...she will find me and I will find her and it will a happy day for both of us...James |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Always be you Jmlee, You are always best when you are yourself, because even if you pretend eventually you have to come out. This is a wonderful poem |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I wouldn't change a thing about you James, even if I could!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
James, I love the honesty and openess of your words. Beautiful. Dee |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
James this is so touching. It feels like you laid your heart on the line with these words and that's a beautiful thing. What a wonderful I see. Juls |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Do you know what I like about you and your poetry? YOUR HEART....... Jenn E |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Now how did I miss this post before?!@ This is so tender and touching. Beautiful writing, my fellow poet. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
These words are so sweetly endearing James ... just lovely thoughts! Best wishes, /Kit |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Thy tender heart beats to a sound Of passion and love for one to be found Thy spirit soars atop silken clouds Peeking through not knowing when to land Until the day true love touches thy hand May I say once again that your poetry from heart is sooo appreciated. Many a time I read your rhymes and you inspire a reader with thoughts N dreams... Thanks James for sharing |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very sweet James..as sven said..you will find her when you are not looking..just like when im looking for that certain pair of shoes in a certain color or style..i cant find them..not till im looking for a hat do I find the shoes ha ha.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Very nice and liked it a lot!!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
james this is excellant, very touching and tender. Beautifully penned, and if you want her to know whats within in your heart, show her some of your poems. I can guarentee that she will be enchanted. Take care. |
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CAMERON UNDERWOOD Junior Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 26 |
You speak from the tenderness of your heart. Thats what makes a poem flow right from the start. Just speak your true fealings down to send. You'll one day find what your looking for in the end. Very well written |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Rosebud, Marina, Dee, Juliet, Jenn, Tennessee, Coco, Victoria, vandana, Marsha, and Cameron for the lovely responses. Jenn I appreciate your lovely words. Coco such beautiful words from you heart..silken is one of my favorite words...James |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
jmlee12345-Awesome write, I will add this to my private library to read again and again. |
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