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Open Poetry #9

Women

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-09-08 03:26 PM

The gliding waltz
Of beauty seen
The fragrent smell
A womans gleam
The bounce of breasts
In stride with time
The wonderment
Of lovely eyes
The way of which
They wear their hair
Just knowing that they're everywhere
To talk to
Whisper in her ear
To just grab on and hold them near
Without them we would be much less
But with them life is such a mess
Admire and forgive that fault
That we have very different minds
The opposite attraction kind
That binds to our very soul
Such intertwining I have shown
It feeds us each and everyday
The need for one another
The part of life that makes you stay
And live this life we have here.

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 09-08-2000).]

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-09-08 03:36 PM

WOW what a wonderful tribute to women everywhere...and I thank you

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-09-08 05:59 PM

Women Everywhere? Huh...sounds like a tribute to LSU's school of nursing! Glad to see the signs of life...hugs and smiles, rich.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

3 posted 2000-09-10 09:42 PM

Thank you both and Serenity I was looking out of the bldg when I wrote this lol.
But the thought is to all you beautiful women out there in general. God How I love you all.
Rich

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-09-10 09:46 PM

Your appreciation for the beauty and grace of women flows thru your words...gently...James

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