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Show me Mine |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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She likes to play and he like disappears flying away on night wings she sings come back play new game: thongs and hearts come play doctor like when we were kids a barn loft or in a tree by the creek okay show me mine and I'll show you yours... he says.. grinning [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Hehe. The old doctor game. Worked back then, bet it still does. If I show you my poem will you show me yours? Hehe Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
show me mine and I'll show you yours... Geesh - You'd never guess how many times I fell for that one!... heh heh - |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rebel, This is nice. Loved the twist. At least he didn't say no you can't play with mine cause you broke yours off. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
wipe that thilly grin off your fathe...  cute poem i dig the kid's game theme how'd you come up with thomthin' like that? geesh  ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a good apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
thank you one and all.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thongs and hearts? hmmmm....sounds like fun |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
loved the lines in this, the playful feeling...and the ending *ng* |
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