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If I Could Fly
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If I Could Fly |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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If I Could Fly An old worn door stays shut no one knocks or rings anymore a peephole to the outside world seldom see's the eye Alone in a chair by a window she peers through a curtain of lace while children play in a nearby field she strains to see with squinted eyes A robin sits on the window sill eyeing a worm as he inches by at her soft crys, he flys If only I could fly ... I would fly to that field run like the wind, to chase a balloon lay in the grass, to watch the clouds as they turn to puppy dogs, with tails and the man in the moon, as he smiles If only I could fly ... BloomingRose |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I just don't have the words to say how much this touched me, you penned the feelings so very well and the parts of my heart this touched are ones that I don't look at very often....absolutely exquisite writing~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is so evocative.... so wonderful... great work... Thanks for the read... regards, Sudhir. P.S. if you could fly, can I too? and if I could, can I fly along side you?  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
If I was granted a wish ... It would be that we could all fly ...to our dreams ... even if only for a day and a night ... Imagine the magic that would adorn these pages Wonderfully written thankyou for sharing it with us  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Soar in your heart to that field Race among the breezes kicking dust No more doors in which to shield Go fly my rose...to do it is a must Beautiful write and full of saddened dreams |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Butterflies, Thanks glad you like it Sudhir, How sweet... wish we could fly Rex, Glad you like thanks Mark, Fly away... if I could. I feel for the lonely hearts out there. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, BloomingRose! I enjoyed this very much! Denise |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
if only...... ~H |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Excellent Blooming Rose. Wonderful thoughts. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
BR- You touched me to the quick with this~S~ |
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